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pete40
02-15-2011, 08:10 AM
So today was the day i had to stop smoking,"starting to get out of breath very quickly these days"That's not good at 43 i told myself,The local chemist had an adviser to help people give up so i walked in .The chemist shop was small ,about the size of a 2 car garage .I walked up to the counter where a young woman of about 20 smiled and said" hello sir how may i help you "?
"You need to speak with Denise she said",after i told her why i was there.
From a back room a woman in her late 40s appeared,"hello",she said smiling
"its never too late" silly old bag i thought I'm not that old.

She led me to a small room with in the small already cramped shop,it was a bit ad hoc like a shed in ones living room,"Sit down that's it well done"she said i an odd sort of stern way."You men ,you make me laugh so tuff yet you cant give up the cigs"I looked down at my feet "i know" was all i could mumble.
I almost felt like saying sorry miss,I told myself to stop being stupid.
"have you tried giving up before"? sorry what is your name ? she asked I looked up its then i noticed her bosom it was big ,i quickly looked her in the eye "i told her my name "and yes many times,at least six but failed ,this time i am going to give the gum a try".I looked down feeling ashamed admitting deafeat,like most men i think.
"for goodness sake i bet if you got a kick in your testicles every time you where seen smocking you ed give it up"I couldnt believe what she had just said but she did and this gave me a massive adrenalin rush my hart started to pound ,i felt my face go red my dick started to get hot.I had to think fast and with the Adrenalins help with in a nanosecond i herd my self say.

pete40
02-15-2011, 12:38 PM
"The only thing wrong with that method i can see, is finding a woman to administer the punishment",She smiled looked me up and down, then her face turned red she lost her breath a little"I'm sure it wont be that difficult.After all the kick would be punishment for smoking",.A man getting his testicles kicked would have himself to blame don't you think ? "Yes,o yes ,
i replied my cock was starting to get very hard its head held by the waist band of my underwear.Then Denise chuckled to herself "Its not very practical i cant follow you all day hoping to catch you smocking now can i ",?
Hoping she said hoping my hart was racing i had finally met a woman that wants to kick my balls,and looking at her the thought of it was turning her on !
"I would be honest about it with you"i said
"would you ?even tho it would mean a kick in the testicles ?
"yes in fact i have had at least 5 cigarettes so far today"i opened my legs a little hoping that my balls where outlined in my chinos for her,
She looked around her self her gaze stopped at the door ,at the top was a small glass panel.Standing up she positioned her self so as to hide me from view.Pointing at the floor with her pen "On your knees please Peter"
I obeyed after 1st pulling my trousers up tight my balls made a nice lump for her to take aim at .I couldn't stand the anticipation i was turned on to the point of extacy.
The 1st kick hit me.i say hit me but it was more like i felt her shoe touch the outside of my pants.
I may have been disappointed but Denise was not after her kick she seemed to judder all over and smile "woo can do that again"?
"silly me i can, i get 4 more kicks"she answered her own question
the next kick was harder a lot harder,i gave out a yelp and grabbed my crotch.
"shush", was all denise said
and indicated for me to open my legs
the 3rd kick missed my balls and hit the base of my dick.To my surprise,
the panting denise sat down still holding her pen she grabbed a sheet of
paper and started to scribble something .
She looked at me "This is wonderful but not the place to do it,here this is my address",I took the paper from her shaking hand,
Then she stood up "before you go",she said as she got close enough to hold my face into her stomach,i didn't struggle as i knew she wanted to smother my cry when she kicked me.
I took a deep breath and braced myself opened my legs as wide as i could.
My balls where low hanging free in my loose fitting chinos if i moved i could
feel them swing a little.Denise then realised she was too close.
"Silly boy how can i kick them when you are that close"
"sorry"
she glared at me
"sorry what ?
"sorry miss"i said
"that's better Peter now bite onto this",she handed me some rolled up sheets of a4 paper.I did as i was told.And then she kicked me.
WHACK i bit the paper.It wasn't a devastating blow but hard enough for her to get the full reaction from it.I bent forward my right hand holding my wounded balls my left keeping me from falling to the floor.I moaned as i felt the ache in my left nut more than the right."My balls my balls"i mumbled as i
looked up at her ample bosom.



part 3 of a story"or is it"part 3 soon........yes its a story total fantasy

glennpeach13
02-15-2011, 02:43 PM
Awesome story man! Can't wait until part 3! =)

pete40
02-16-2011, 06:40 AM
Awesome story man! Can't wait until part 3! =)

thanks for the kind words,i am not sure yet how to go with part 3
I am trying to make it a believable scenario.

Alec Anaconda
02-16-2011, 12:30 PM
I’m looking forward to part 3!


Alec Anaconda

pete40
02-18-2011, 04:19 AM
She put her hand on my shoulder.
"i didn't hit you that hard silly man,now get up"
"sorry miss".
I stood up still holding my balls and wincing a little the ache felt nice like my nuts had a worm glow.
"Stop holding yourself dirty boy",
I moved my hands from my groin,my erection was now in sight poking out from my trousers but Denise hadn't noticed so i moved it back into the waist band of my under pants.Touching it made me want to empty my load there and then,I held back on the impulse i didn't risk shocking her here in the shop.
"You have my home address i will see you 7.30 this evening"
"You will not be late!".
"Yes miss".
I raced home burst into my small one bed flat,within a few seconds i was down to my under pants standing in my bathroom.I held my cock in my hand it was harder than i had ever known it before, rigid and throbbing .With my left hand i squeezed my balls picturing Denise's foot hitting them.Well that was it i exploded! o my god i shouted as i emptied my sack into my pants i try to pull them down but too late rubbing my self trough my underwear i had one of the most prolonged orgasms ever it felt as if it would never end.I removed my pants and held my balls stretching them away from my body my dick dripping cum onto the floor the sack was a bright red my orbs still tender to the touch,i pressed my thumb into my right ball then my left then both at the same time .To my surprise my cock started to stiffen again i pressed harder imagining it was Denise,s fingers holding them i started to rub my cock turning the cum it was covered in to creamy thick white mess.But i needed the presser on my balls to intensify but in a sudden sharp way like the kick i received from Denise I knelled in front of the loo lifted the seat and lid placed my balls on the cold porcelain this felt good as it soothed the ache a little.I started to rub myself and instantly felt i was going to cum,wow i am going to shoot for the second time .I pumped my self faster and faster closed my eyes picturing the moment again feeling that i was about to cum i slammed the two hard plastic parts of the loo seat down onto my already tender balls.My dick could only manage a small dribble this time but the orgasm was no less intense if not more so.Then i felt the pain i fell back onto the bathroom floor cupped my balls and curled up into a fetal position moaning softly i was in heaven !
I showered then made a cup of tea sitting down in my living room i felt almost in an hypnotic state my balls had stopped hurting and i started to think about tonight's meeting with Denise ,I had five hours to kill.

Hi guys hope you like part 3

Alec Anaconda
02-18-2011, 09:30 AM
This story is believable, with the ring of gritty truth.

Please keep writing.


Alec Anaconda

pete40
02-21-2011, 08:19 AM
I arrived at her house full of anticipation and i must say lust !
Before i could knock or even look for a bell to ring the door opened.
"come in come in",
I followed her into the hallway,her figure looked a lot more pleasing than it had in the chemist.
Her clothing looked a lot more formal .
Tshirt under a cardigan and jeans muscle toning trainers where the order of the day there.

I stared at her bum it was big but not too big not small pert and round like say a fit 20year old.
It was a nice arse, an arse that at this moment i wanted to feel.
It looked firm, i couldn't see any harm being done if i touched it in a nice way?
Her behind was wrapped in a tight navy blue pencil skirt ,that stopped just short of the knee
"o man it looks so nice"
I could feel my dick starting to swell.
My mind started to swim a thousand images where flashing in front of my eyes...wow in that one she is spanking my balls and wanking me off,
now she is making me go down on her as her sister kicks my balls from behind,
Her sister ? i don't even know if shes got a sister !
All these and many more images are going threw my head every nanosecond.
She stops in front of me and turns,
Now i can see the most beautiful pair of breasts i have ever seen.
Bursting out of her white blouse pushing the fine cotton frame work of her bra into an out line i could trace with my eye.
I followed it it the center of her chest where her blouse buttons where straining at their threads.
This gave a tantalising look at her cleavage.
Man my cock was so hard ,i was in heaven,
This woman is mine,
SMACK!!!!!!!
her foot hits my balls
OOOOOMPH
the air leaves my body,i bend at the middle my butt shoots backwards
and my feet leave the ground by about 3inchs.
I end up holding my balls almost crying at her feet.
"I will ask you not to stare at my chest Peter"
was all she said,



A note to readers can you please leave a coment.
If you think its crap or what ever.
any tips or advice,
Pete

pete40
02-21-2011, 08:20 AM
I arrived at her house full of anticipation and i must say lust !
Before i could knock or even look for a bell to ring the door opened.
"come in come in",
I followed her into the hallway,her figure looked a lot more pleasing than it had in the chemist.
Her clothing looked a lot more formal .
Tshirt under a cardigan and jeans muscle toning trainers where the order of the day there.

I stared at her bum it was big but not too big not small pert and round like say a fit 20year old.
It was a nice arse, an arse that at this moment i wanted to feel.
It looked firm, i couldn't see any harm being done if i touched it in a nice way?
Her behind was wrapped in a tight navy blue pencil skirt ,that stopped just short of the knee
"o man it looks so nice"
I could feel my dick starting to swell.
My mind started to swim a thousand images where flashing in front of my eyes...wow in that one she is spanking my balls and wanking me off,
now she is making me go down on her as her sister kicks my balls from behind,
Her sister ? i don't even know if shes got a sister !
All these and many more images are going threw my head every nanosecond.
She stops in front of me and turns,
Now i can see the most beautiful pair of breasts i have ever seen.
Bursting out of her white blouse pushing the fine cotton frame work of her bra into an out line i could trace with my eye.
I followed it it the center of her chest where her blouse buttons where straining at their threads.
This gave a tantalising look at her cleavage.
Man my cock was so hard ,i was in heaven,
This woman is mine,
SMACK!!!!!!!
her foot hits my balls
OOOOOMPH
the air leaves my body,i bend at the middle my butt shoots backwards
and my feet leave the ground by about 3inchs.
I end up holding my balls almost crying at her feet.
"I will ask you not to stare at my chest Peter"
was all she said,



A note to readers can you please leave a coment.
If you think its crap or what ever.
any tips or advice,
Pete

Alec Anaconda
02-21-2011, 11:59 AM
I like your ideas, Pete.
You have an adventurous imagination.


any tips or advice

How do you think you could improve the story so far?

Alec Anaconda

Takkyuu_tama
02-22-2011, 01:11 AM
yeah, nice description of bodies and clothing. important little details :thumbup

pete40
02-23-2011, 08:28 AM
just wasted over 2hours writing part 5 .Then i was logged out why?

pete40
02-23-2011, 08:30 AM
yeah, nice description of bodies and clothing. important little details :thumbup


Thank you.

Alec Anaconda
02-23-2011, 09:36 AM
just wasted over 2hours writing part 5 .Then i was logged out why?


That’s a real bitch.

Many posters, including me, write offline into Notepad or Word, then copy and paste when they’re finished.

Word can be tricky to copy from, without including unwanted control information.


Alec Anaconda

pete40
02-23-2011, 11:33 AM
Thanks for the intel,
I will post 1 paragraph at a time,

pete40
02-28-2011, 10:25 AM
Now all the images where gone in a massive flash of pain.
By now i was laying on my side holding my balls unable even to moan.
Her feet where very close to my face ,so where the first thing i saw when i unclenched my eyes.
She had on flat bottomed soft leaver shoes in a pale blue colour,
the leather so soft i could see her toes flexing.
I started to think, how a small little foot could administer such a devastating blow.
Well it did,
This made my cock throb even more.
Denise bent down toward me,

pete40
02-28-2011, 10:48 AM
Sniffing the air above me she snapped,
"You'Ve been smoking"
"You stink"
"Even your cloths SMELL"
"Stand up peter and take your cloths of down to your under pants please",
I couldn't wait to obey
Soon i was stood in front of her my hands still holding my sore balls
Her hand moved towards my crotch ,a finger wagging from side to side ,
telling me to move my hands away from my balls.
I obeyed.
Her finger touched my cock ,softly .
"Look at me Peter"
I looked up into her eyes from my semi crouched position.
"This is exciting you?"
Her finger moved down my shaft to my balls,
She then traced the out line of my balls using her finger nail.
This made me unable to speak so i nodded yes
She swallowed and looked visibly pleased

pete40
02-28-2011, 11:17 AM
Her hands moved to her sides the fingers griping her skirt.
she started to pull it up .
Only the part of the skirt below her butt cheeks moved.
This is it ! i thought She wants me to please her with my tongue, and
i was going to show her how well i could serve her.
CRACK !!!
Her knee smashed my balls up and against my pelvic bone.
OOOOMPH
"DO NOT FALL DOWN",she shouted ,
She grabbed my arms pulling them away from my balls,but i couldn't stand .
Even my dick was starting to soften,my balls where hurt bad,.
I slumped to the floor trying to catch my breath.
Denise stood still her hand rubbing her thigh.
"Come on get up its your own fault,Peter".

pete40
03-01-2011, 05:32 AM
"You agreed to this punishment "
I managed to wheeze out a "yes Miss",but i was beginning to doubt my capacity for ball abuse.
"Stand up please"
I rose to my feet as quickly as the pain that started in my balls rising to my gut would allow.
She looked down at my crotch and spoke.
"so far peter the punishment you have received has been for your lewd behavior"
She stopped to think for a second her gaze rose up,as if an old memory had popped into her head.
"All my life i have had men and boys drool over my breast treating me like a person of no Worth ,just a pair of breasts."
"How i wanted to kick them in the privates you would not believe,well now i have and it felt good"
"Thank you Peter,"
"How are your things ?"she pointed
"Can we continue now ?

pete40
03-01-2011, 06:15 AM
"Fine Miss thank you" i groveled.
After all she was correct from the moment i 1st saw her i was focusing on her tits and not her face.
Keeping my head down as i spoke i asked .
"Can i check them please Miss "
I moved my hands inside my under pants
Then i looked up ,raising my head away from the floor up past her belly toward her chest .
Do not even notice them ,i told my self.
My eyes past over her boobs as if i was blind ,i needed time for my balls to recover so i took no chances.
"Yes you can Peter "
"Do it properly take off your pants"
She wants me naked ! YES
as soon as the words left her mouth my cock started to grow.
I pulled my pants down making sure i hid my hard on with my left hand and wrist.
Wow my balls looked bigger.
They where red all over a bright red like a slapped face.
My ballsack had become thicker it felt spongy under my fingers.
I probed deeper until my finger was able to put pressure on my ball
Well the left ball felt fine in fact i was able to squeeze it as hard as i do when i masturbate
But my right nut was a lot more tender to the touch.
"Well how are they can we carry on ? "

crushee
03-01-2011, 11:27 AM
Please, keep writing...


just wasted over 2hours writing part 5 .Then i was logged out why?

You may consider writing your story "locally" on your computer, with MS Word or anything similar, and then, once connected, copy and paste the new text in the appropriate window from this site.

pete40
03-01-2011, 11:46 AM
Thanks for the kind words and advice crushee,i will give it a go.

Alec Anaconda
03-01-2011, 01:05 PM
Whichever method you select, please keep this story alive.

I need to find if this is a cure for the deadly weed!

Alec Anaconda

Revenant
03-01-2011, 01:24 PM
Nice story! Looking forward to seeing what she does when the real treatment begins...

One from the Vaults
03-01-2011, 02:29 PM
Good stuff! Very sexy.

pete40
03-01-2011, 02:52 PM
Whichever method you select, please keep this story alive.

I need to find if this is a cure for the deadly weed!

Alec Anaconda

Sorry Alec no story is good enough to cure the weed only real life is that good.
Remember for the price of an ounce you could buy some time with a prodom.

pete40
03-01-2011, 03:00 PM
Good stuff! Very sexy.

Thank you .

pete40
03-01-2011, 04:38 PM
"Fine Miss".
"What Peter? speak up !
"Yes Miss we can carry on my balls are fine ".
The words came out my mouth and drifted towards my dick taking my mind with them,i was so turned on my whole body felt hot and alive my ball sak started to tingle and retract as the skin was taken up by my erection.
"Testicles is the correct term Peter please use it ",
"Sorry Miss"i closed my eyes expecting a kick that didn't come,
"Put your hands on your head".

Alec Anaconda
03-12-2011, 02:33 PM
Has Peter been standing with his hands on his head for ten days?

What will she do next?

Alec Anaconda

pete40
03-13-2011, 04:59 AM
Has Peter been standing with his hands on his head for ten days?

What will she do next?

Alec Anaconda

Ha ha hi Alec i am now writing the rest of the story using word.
I hope to finish soon
Thanks for your interest.

pete40
03-14-2011, 08:14 AM
Hi guys sorry its taken so long ,but i am even more sorry its not
complete.

"HOPE IT WORKS "

pete40
03-14-2011, 08:16 AM
Sorry no attachment !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

pete40
03-14-2011, 08:32 AM
The latest part is in word word processor ,
I am trying to put here with manage attachments below.
Is this the best way ?

pete40
03-14-2011, 08:51 AM
I put my right hand on top of my head, but I didn’t want to move my left hand away from my dick.
“Hurry up Peter “
Her hands moved up and rested on her hips ,
“Both hands please”
I obeyed revelling my penis to her ,by now it was very hard the end looked a deep purple.
A not often seen small vain ran from the under its rim to the eye,
The for skin taken up by the fullness of my erection.
It was’ant big .
I had got used to the fact that I didn’t have an impressive dick but I still
Found it difficult to show a woman.
“Well done Peter”,she said.
I was relieved she didn’t comment on the size of my member.
Maybe she hadn’t seen a lot of naked men ,or perhaps its size was not relevant to her.
I am sure I will find out in the future and be able to tell you all here.
“Now peter if you are ready ?”
“Yes Miss “I closed my eyes
“Open your legs wider “.
She spoke in a soft smooth voice that sounded very calm.
I spread my legs out ,my balls felt free and in the open hanging down swollen and heavy.
She walked around me slowly, twice stopping behind my back.
I then felt a hand on my shoulder and one on the front of my hip.
I guessed she wanted me to bend at the waist so I did putting my hands on my knees.
“You can open your eyes Peter”,
“You are not going to see this one coming”!
Then silence total silence ,my ball sack started to tingle I pumped the blood harder into my cock.
I couldn’t believe the fantasy had come true as I wondered how hard the kick would be.
I could hear her soft footsteps on the carpet as she took a step back,. And the long breath she took in .
She let her breath out slowly my ears in tune with it as I felt the kick would come the moment ,
that sound stopped
And sure enough it did
“OOOMPH”
The kick wasn’t as hard .
“OOOMPH”
But the second kick hit me almost immediately after.
Then the 3rd
Smack smack smack now I was feeling the blows .
 

pete40
03-17-2011, 10:14 AM
 
Then the kicks stopped, and she moved closer to me .
So close I could feel her hot breath on my skin
She pressed her body into my jutting butt ,as her left hand reached under and cupped my balls.
“Should I drop the pretence and and give in to the sexual feelings Peter”?.
As she spoke in an almost whisper quite voice her fingers where slowly getting to know my balls.
Probing deep ,it felt like she was interested and learning something with every squeeze.
Then with her right hand she touched my cock !
“YES”
The pretence ?
The smoking ,man I had forgot about that after the 1st kick.
“Please Miss yes “
My mind began to fly ,I felt hot all over my body .
And began to feel calm and ready for sex.
It felt like I was about to make love to someone I loved.
Her breathing was getting heaver ,she pushed her self harder into me at the same time pulling my balls back under my ass.
It was starting to hurt a lot as ,my balls had no where to go as her thrusting was ******* me to stand up straight And it felt good ,my dick was begging for my hand I had to grab it .
My fingers wrapped around it I started to stroke my self.
She eased off with the pulling but not the probing which had become an attempt by her to squeeze every square millimetre of each ball by holding them with 4 fingers and pressing her thumb into it .
She would keep applying pressure until my nut popped out from under her thumb .
That gave me a sort of Paine rush and I almost cum.
She had learnt that quick !
When she got to the centre of each ball and held it firm it wasn’t going to slip away and she knew it .
“You would like that wouldn’t you Peter.”?

pete40
03-17-2011, 10:25 AM
“If I gave into my desires you would get to ejaculate ,and after all Peter you are a man”.
“And we all know that’s the only thing you boys think about”

pete40
03-17-2011, 10:53 AM
That’s a real bitch.

Many posters, including me, write offline into Notepad or Word, then copy and paste when they’re finished.

Word can be tricky to copy from, without including unwanted control information.


Alec Anaconda

Thanks Alex ,it seems so smple now.

Alec Anaconda
03-17-2011, 01:27 PM
I did very little; you persevered with the technology until you got your result.

Thank you for an interesting story, Pete40.

Alec Anaconda

pete40
03-19-2011, 05:25 PM
She released her grip on me and took a step back,I could hear her breathing becoming faster,
I turned to look at her ,
Her skirt was in a bundle around her ankles her hands clawing at the crotch of her nylon tights.
Her fingers unable to get thru to her raw naked woman’s flesh of her pussy
.
Because she was a nail biter and had no way of piercing them but made no attempt to pull her nylons,
down I felt this was my chance to hopefully give her massive pleasure.
I got down on my knees in front of her my nose rubbing her crack thru her underwear.
I moved my hands up the outside of her legs softly caressing her with my fingertips.
At the same time I tried to grip her nylons with my teeth , but as I bit with my teeth ,
My face would push them out of my way .
The harder I pushed the more excited she got.

Alec Anaconda
03-20-2011, 01:14 PM
Another cliffhanger pause!

More please, Pete.

Alec Anaconda