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kickpom
07-12-2012, 12:42 PM
Hi guys, I've started on another story so thought I'd share what I've done so far, still working on it so any feedback for which way to steer it is appreciated,

Thanks!


this is a world where females are dominant and men are submissive.

I've recently found a new job, one that gives men a decent enough pay to get by. I work in a ballbusting brothel where women come to unwind their stressful day. I arrived on my first shift prompt and was ordered into the clinic room by the female clerk. inside the clinic was a female doctor, a beautiful blonde who was sitting cross legged wearing her doctors outfit with short skirt and heels.
"ah come in, take your clothes of and let's get through this" she said. I quietly obeyed and quickly stripped done to my underwear.
"you won't be needing your boxers in here, don't be shy". I hesitated but knew I would have to agree. I felt her eyes burning into the back of my head as I pulled down my boxers, revealing my package. I tried not to look at the nurse to avoid an embarrassing hard on.
"perfect! our clients absolutely love big balls. the bigger the better, the harder the better is the motto in here" she was referring to kicking, not hard cocks unfortunately. I laughed nervously as I stood naked in front of the doc. she began to take notes on her clipboard.
"you have a decent sized member too, not too big, not to small. perfect target. our clientele will love that." she looked up at me,
"lucky for you, this is a more luxurious brothel. you'll find that we have the more sophisticated and more attractive ladies busting our men's balls". she giggled and stood up. I gulped as she grabbed a small black collar to tie around my nut sack. the nurse walked up to me and lifted my growing penis up an out of the way then reached around the back of my sack and tied the collar around the top of my ballbag. this made my balls hang lower and budge out from below.
"great! this means you're ready to be kicked!" you can make your way to the wreck room with the other men. I'll dispose of your clothes". I nodded, leaving the room and shuffling off down the corridor with the slightly uncomfortable collar wrapped around my manhood.


Upon entering the next room, I was greeted by the other males. there were 10 of us in here, naked apart from our black nut collars. before we could get well acquainted, the bell rang, signalling that clients arrived. quickly and quietly, all of the men walked into the front hall with me in between them, I was just following the herd. we stood in a line in front of the back wall, the floor was draped with soft red carpet and the room had an overall upmarket feel. two women who were in charge stood next to our line while an older male stood by the door. he was wearing nothing but a tie and a white nut collar. white nut collars signified that the balls have been destroyed, ruptured, or crushed. basically meaning they were useless, they were replaced with silicon implants and the ex men used as house slaves. the old man promptly opened the door and in walked two women wearing long fur coats, it must have been cold outside. the man took their coats and
hung them up in the cloak room while the ladies eyed us all up. both ladies looked after their figure well, both were tall, slim and had well rounded boobs. the one on the right was a brunette with long straight hair and the other was a blonde with curly hair.
"so, ladies", said the hostess, "stilettos again?"
the lady on the left quickly responded "ohhh yes please!"
while the lady on the right was a bit more indecisive, "hmm, last week one of my slaves nuts ruptured sooner than I wanted thanks to the stilettos. I'll try the sandals"
the hostess snapped her fingers and two more slaves come out holding red cushions with the shoes on top of them. The two slaves wear also wearing ties and white collars. I shuddered as they approached the ladies with zero confidence while trying to remain elegant. The curly haired lady quickly snatched the white stilettos out of the cushion and as she slipped her boots off, the slave promptly bent over on all fours so she could sit on him as a chair. She sat down and eagerly put the pointy toed shoes of destruction on. The brunette picked up the black strappy sandals by their heel straps and waited for her slave to get on all fours - which he did obediently like clockwork. She sat down and took off her wellies, revealing a beautiful pair of well peddicured feet. She slipped the sandals on and tied the diamonte encrusted straps. The slave next to me elbowed me and snapped me out of my gaze, I noticed my cock was growing which was a sure fire sign of
getting picked on so I quickly looked away, trying to keep my cock from getting rock hard.
"Now ladies, you may pick your slaves" said the hostess.
The brunette stood in front of us with her hands on her hips and said seductively "right, two of you will be my lucky slaves". The slightly shortered curly haired lady stood next to her in the same posture and said,
"well, i've only got room for one, and guess what?" she pulled out a rupture token - meaning that she was allowed to rupture the balls of one slave. Fear struck my heart, as did every other slaves'. The brunette retorted;
"so have I, that will be saved for the weaker of my two subs". I now knew I had a 1 in 5 chance of losing my balls on my first day, and I wasn't looking forward to it! The white collared slaves hastily made their way out of the room as the two ladies split up and started inspecting us from either side. I was in the middle of the 10 guys lined up.

the procedure here was simple. the lady kicks each sub once to gauge whether or not she wants to choose him. the first kick decides how the rest of the evening pans out for the sub. if the sub falls straight to the floor, he is used as a free gimp for that lady. this means that he would be tied to a cross with arms and legs spread out so that he could get his balls pummeled with ease. this is supposed to toughen the weak subs up however in a lot of cases, the ladies go too far and end up destroying his balls before he even gets a chance to be used normally! for those who are able to remain standing, it's down to the woman's discretion who they wish to take. some women prefer the men who double over in pain so they can easily see the pain they inflict on the slave, while others prefer more of a challenge so they go for the ones who barely flinch when getting kicked at first. although all that macho-ness changes in the session chamber. it was just a guessing game for us slaves as to which type these ladies are after. the stiletto donned lady began by swiftly punting the first slave square in the balls. he screamed in agony and doubled over. she looked on the the next slave mercilessly and slowly shifted towards him. the brunette swung her foot firmly into the first slaves balls on the other end causing him to double over. she quickly moved on to the next one and eyed him up. this second slave was more of the muscular type, with a cocky look in his eye. she took an instant disliking to him so decided to kick him extra hard on purpose hoping he'd fall. she stepped back, swung her leg full force and slammed her foot into the slaves balls sending him crashing to the ground instantly like a whimp.
"looks like I found my gimp!" she said gleefully as one of the hostesses snapped her fingers, signalling another slave in to escort him to her chamber. she quickly moved on to the next one who was standing next to me. I looked back over and caught a glimpse of the other lady snapping a kick with her pointed toe into her second slaves nutsack which made him yelp in a high pitched tone. as much as I feared the sadistic tendencies that the brunette had, I knew I'd lose my balls as he blonde is only taking one slave to use her rupture token on. the brunette had two slaves to take so I fancied my chances. I figured out that the stiletto clad blonde was looking for a jittery slave while the high heeled sandal wearing lady was after a stronger man so I decided to try and stay upright as best as I could when it was my turn. I hoped that the brunette reached me before the blonde did. out of the corner of my eye I caught the brunette kicking the slave next to me,
he barely moved a muscle.
"ohhh I like you!" she said. "I''ll take this one". the hostess snapped her fingers again and another white collar came and took him to her chamber. I heard a thud and a squeal to my left followed by "this one will do!". I let out a sigh of relief as he was taken away to her.chamber. I locked eyes with the slave and seen the fear in his eyed...both of us knowing his manhood was no more... the brunette looked me deep in the eye seductively, and had s quick glance at my package. I tensed up my body and awaited her blow. she licked her teeth as she slammed her foot into my balls. I moaned out but only just managed to maintain my posture, bending over slightly.
"I'll take you" she winked. I was escorted to her chambers knowing I'd get paid, all I had to do now was keep my nuts. I knew I was in for a tough time as the slave I'm up against seemed pretty tough. I decided not to dwell on it.

stepping into the room, I saw the gimp already tied to the cross, panting and sweating. he had a wooden mouth piece between his teeth to help him handle the pain as well as keep.him quiet. in front of him and slightly to his right knelt my competitor, with his hands handcuffed behind his backers . I was told to kneel next to him, which I did, while I got cuffed as well. the white collar left the room and we waited for our tormentor. I could her the sound of high heels clicking against the wooden floorboards in the corridor, approaching our room. the door knob turned and the brunette stepped in.

kickthem
07-15-2012, 08:18 AM
Fantastic beginning! I love the set up - you have created a level of anticipation where I can't wait to read what happens next.

Suggestion: Start out with the brunette's escapades, cut over to the blonde's, and then finish with the bruneete's session.

Anymous1
07-15-2012, 03:17 PM
Hey Kickpom

Thanks very much for posting the beginning of the story. I suppose that I would make the same recommendation that "kickthem" made to you. The only thing I really care about is reading more and getting into some serious 'action.'

Thanks again.
:ibow4u:

kickpom
07-17-2012, 03:15 PM
hmm sounds good. I've already started the next scene so I'll finish this off then next go into the escapades of the ladies.

Dereknor
07-17-2012, 03:29 PM
I love it too! Cant wait to read more :)

poolman2
07-19-2012, 05:08 PM
kickpom,

This looks very promising. I'm eager for more. :bananajum

Please keep up this good work.

Regards,

poolman2

slugbug
07-20-2012, 10:11 AM
great story ,looking forward to the next part:ibow4u:

kickpom
07-26-2012, 09:46 AM
Thanks guys.

Well I have a disappointing update, I was almost finished this story before I ended up losing my battery, I lost over half of the story so I'll rewrite it when I feel up to it.

Thanks for your patience

ballsack
07-26-2012, 04:30 PM
Great story hope the next part is as good as this one.

Anymous1
07-26-2012, 09:03 PM
Hey Kickpom

I am really sorry to hear that your lost half of the story that you wrote. I personally know how frustrating it is to lose a document in a power outage/ freak circumstance.

Thanks for the update. I look forward to reading your story whenever you finish.

:ibow4u::ibow4u:

kickpom
07-27-2012, 12:24 PM
Finished the rest on my phone, ended up being g a bit too extreme for my liking but hopefully you guys will enjoy it.




Stepping into the room, I saw the gimp already tied to the cross, panting and sweating. he had a wooden mouth piece between his teeth to help him handle the pain as well as keep.him quiet. in front of him and slightly to his right knelt my competitor, with his hands handcuffed behind his back. I was told to kneel next to him, which I did, while I got cuffed as well. the white collar left the room and we waited for our tormentor. I could her the sound of high heels clicking against the wooden floorboards in the corridor, approaching our room. the door knob turned and the brunette stepped in.
"Hello boys, I'm Amy, lets have some fun". I quivered at the sight of her, I now managed to take my first good look at her beauty. Her long straight hair flowing down her back, her low cut top exposing her boobs and her knee length skirt with a slit showing us glimpes of her tanned, long, muscular legs, and of course, her beautiful petticured feet being shown off by her black high heeled sandals. I knew I was to get well acquainted with those. As both of us knelt on the floor, we couldnt help but watch in awe while our cocks started rising and becoming fully erect. She glanced down at our packages and gasped,
"ah, I think they like me, all three of them!" she joked, both of our cocks were of similar size, although my balls were a little bigger than the other slaves and hanging down nice and low making an easy target. I looked behind me and saw the gimp with his hard on as well, cock and balls bigger than ours.
"Did I say you could turn around?!" Amy shouted.
"S-sorry ma'am" I stuttered.
"Oh you will be" she said with a wicked smile. So stupid of me! Now I'm her prime target. She walked up towards us. We presented ourselves as she got closer, pushing our packages forward.
"Now, one of you will be drawing the short straw today, I can't say much about our gimp, so lets see who's stronger, shall we?" she asked rhetorically as she stood empoweringly in front of me. I looked up at her, trembling as I braced for impact. She slid her right foot back and swung it into my dangling testicles, slamming them against my pelvis, I groaned loud as I tried my best to stay upright. She ran her fingers down my cheek, soothing me, sliding her hand to my left nipple and pinching it before moving across to the other slave. Amy fired a quick kick in out of the blue before even getting into position, catching him off guard. He bent over more than I did however her kick wasn't as hard. She kicked him again and he moaned louder but stayed upright. She swiftly stepped to me and smashed her foot into my sack, her straps digging into my ballbag as her foot tore up my pelvis. I doubled over in agony.
"Awk! I think it would be best if you were all strapped to a cross like gimpy, move aside boys", she raised her hands together and split them apart, signalling us to move asides. We did so, obediently. She stepped in, and smacked the gimp square in the balls with a good run up. He screamed and bit down on the wooden mouth peice. She relentlessly stepped back and swung her foot in again, creating a loud thud echoing across the room. Then again, thud, and again, thud, thud, thud. His screams were becoming more high pitched with each hard kick. She didn't stop, she started panting and kicking even harder, smack, smack, smack. By this time, the gimp lost his voice and was even unable to bite down on the piece. I felt his pain, he had a look of pure fear in his eyes, knowing anything goes with him. After a final kick, she rested for a second,
"This is much more fun! Don't you agree boys?" We had no choice but to nod and agree. She stepped to his side and kicked him on his stomache. She's definately had some sort of self defence practice, the way she kicks, was in the form of a karate expert. She kicked his stomache again, and then again a third time, somewhat focusing the pain towards his tummy before reverting back to the groin. While in the same posture, she slammed her foot into his groin from the side, catching the nut closer to her and dragging it upwards into his body. When she pulled back, his nuts were released and bobbed about with the collar holding them in place. She smacked him again, catching the same nut and smacking it into his body. She kicked him a third time just as hard as before and the gimp limped forward on the cross, his hard on was long gone as he stopped making sounds and stopped trying to squirm.
"Better inspect the damage" she said as she approached him, picking him up by his balls. She held his nutsack and gently squeezed his swollen left testicle.
"This is definately very soft", she squeezed harder as the gimp started squirming again.

"I don't think you'll need this nut anymore, don't you agree?". He violently started shaking his head, spitting the mouth bar out and pleading,

"please! please dont!" she let go of his nuts and stepped back. Phew, she was sparing him - Or so I though. Amy then bent over and picked up the mouth piece, flashing her cleavage in my face while doing so, and then put it back in his mouth.
"You'll need this" she said sadistically as she quickly snapped her hand back into position on his groin, locking his left nut in place within her palm. After teasing him for a brief moment, she suddenly squeezed with all her might, the gimp let out an ear peircing squeel as his nut popped in her hand. She started squishing it around just to make sure that his nut became jelly. His body was all tensed up as he passed out. She let go of his nut and we all looked at his sack, hanging low with one ball intact and the other flat next to it.
"I'll save the other one for later" she smiled as she spun around, facing the two of us.
"Right, get back into position!" we hesitated but slowly shuffled into position in front of her. Ready for round two.

I started sweating out of fear for my manhood.
"ok boys, I'm going to take penalty kicks. You both get 5 kicks each and whoever goes down, goes under the trample board"
We looked at each other then back at Amy who met our nervous looks with sadistic eyes. The the trample board was basically a board on legs with a hole cut out for our junk to rest on, allowing for focused punishment. Amy locked eyes with me first, here we go. She took a quick run up and slammed her foot into my groin. I let out a loud groan of pain as I doubled over. She stepped back and ran up towards my comrade and duly swung her foot into his balls. He hufffed but kept his composure. I started sweating a bit more, knowing I was up against a good competitor. Amy then stepped into me for my second blow as I knelt fully upright again and smashed the top of her foot into my helpless balls. I let out a bellowing moan and leaned forward again.
"that's two, and I think I know who the loser will be!"
I quickly sat upright although I knew another blow at this point will cripple me. Luckily for me, she had her eyes fixated on the other slave. Stepping in, she unleashed a devastating blow to his balls, finally making him lean forward and grunt with pain. She sighed with satisfaction and came at me with my third kick. I braced for impact. The next thing I felt was the straps of her sandals tearing into my nutsack. I instantly fell over forward, writhing in pain.
"ha! Under the trample board you go!"
Amy pointed to the trample board sitting to our left.
"get yourself tucked in while I finish this slave off"
I quietly shuffled over to the board and crawled underneath, facing upwards. My head was just sticking out from the top, of the board with the hole perfectly aligned with my groin. I heard a thud and a moan followed by Amy saying,
"ooo almost!"
I slipped my floppy penis through the hole and pointed it upwards then looked over. I caught amys final run up and seen her bury her foot into his groin then watched him fall over and roll around the ground. I let off a sigh of relief.
"looks like you're both going under the board. Now we can definitely see who's balls are weaker"
She signalled him over to join me. As he crawled under the board she snapped a glare at me
"don't be shy! Pop your nuts through the hole too!" I thought I could get away with trying to influence her in focusing on cock crushing but I failed. I quickly slipped my balls through the hole and waited for my fellow slave to get ready.
"one of you will be coming out with a flat sack!" she laughed sadistically while looking at me. I gulped as my heart started pounding. Amy strutted towards us and raised her right leg, placing it on my colleagues balls and undid her straps. She slid her foot out and repeated with the other shoe. My cock started to harden at the sight of her legs and feet. I could see up her skirt and noticed she was wearing pink underwear. As soon as she seen my hardening cock she stepped over to my side and placed her foot on my balls. And without warning, she hoisted herself up onto the board while applying full weight on my sack. I groaned as her foot dug into my balls, which buldged out from the sides. She giggled as she stood on the board now, towering over us.

Amy placed her left foot on my nutsack and teasing pressed her foot down softly, then wriggled my balls around. She did the same to the other slave with her right foot as he was on the right. She then stepped forward, resting her foot on my cock and balls as well as on his. Her heel was placed with precision just on the top of my sack which pushed my balls downwards when she added weight to it. She pressed down on my groin while lifting her right foot to stroke my peers member. I groaned as she shifted her foot to get her balance. Amy started flicking his penis like a worm with her toes before stroking it, causing it to get erect. I spied a quick glance up her skirt, past her beautiful legs and noticed her moised pink panties. She was getting off on being in full control of two manhoods. Once his cock hardened she placed her foot on it with her heel in the same position as mine and lifted her weight off me. I breathed out relief as my balls withdrew into their natural position. Amy then started stroking my shaft with her foot until it grew and became rock solid as well then placed her foot delicately back into position, pushing my nuts down until they buldged against the edge of my sack. She then lifted her toes so that her heel was digging into my ballsack and started grinding. I groaned as she ground into my balls lower and lower. Just before she got all the way to the bottom, she stopped and placed her foot back over my dick and began to start grinding on my peers nutsack. He let out a soft moan as she almost flattened his nuts with her heel - he had a much higher pain tolerance than I did. Next, Amy placed her feet on our ballbags so that the ball of her foot was touching the base of our cocks and started pedalling, shifting her full weight between each of us creating a symphony of groans and moans.
"mmm I hope you're enjoying this as much as I am" she said as she then placed her heels back on to our sacks.
"lets see who's coming out with a flat sack now shall we?" I gulped as she applied more pressure on our balls, her foot digging deeper into our exposed nuts. I started groaning louder.
"ah I think this one is about to go!" Amy said as her face lit up. I started panicking and sweating as she lifted off my nuts with her heel and placed the ball of her foot on my sack. I pleaded and squirmed, I tried telling her I can last longer but the only reply I got was
"well let's see then". My heart pounded in my chest as she teased me by rubbing her foot over my sack, and then slowly applying pressure on it. Just as she was about to deal the killer stomp, my peer let out a loud moan as amys other foot dropped lower into his nutsack, I heard a 'squick' as she accidently crushed both his nuts flat. Her panties were more wet now,
"whoops, it seems you got lucky today!" she said while looking at me, without any care for his well being. His eyes rolled. Back and his head thumped against the floor, passing out. Amy then lifted her foot off my nuts and they re inflated back into position, followed by lifting her heel slowly off his ruptured nutsack, however his sack stayed flat. I shuddered.
"ok you can get out, I have a reward in store for you" Amy said with a cheeky smile. She jumped off the board, put on her shoes and made her way to the gimp, who was finally conscious. I slipped my tender junk through the hole and crawled out.

Amy bent over and tied a bar around the gimp feet, keeping his legs spread then she reached around the back of the cross and undid a hook. She then slid him down until he was sitting on his bum in front of her, his nutsack resting against the floor. She turned round to face me and stuck her ass into his face while pointing me to get closer.
"I want you to jerk yourself off while I finish our gimp last nut"
He tried protesting but her ass was smothering his face. I looked down at her perfect feet and luscious legs and started yanking at my flaccid cock, it didn't take long to get myself hard while adoring this beautiful view. As I continued wanking, she leaned over, exposing her boobs to my line of sight and slipped off the strap on the back of her left high sandal and raised her heel. Amy then grabbed the gimp remaining nut and stuffed it under her heel in the shoe and pressed down, trapping it in place. I gulped but kept going, releasing some precum. She started shifting her heel around, rolling it around his nut and dropping her heel slowly down lower, and lower, and lower. I could feel his nut trembling under her weight. He was unable to resist as he was completely tied down.
"you may cum on my feet" Amy said, as I was reaching my climax. I tightened my grip around my shaft and slowed down my strokes, I shuffled forward but not too close. I felt the rush of excitement as my cum spewed out of my dick and shot across, landing on her left foot, my second load gushed out and landed on her toes, I was in a state of exctacy as the rest of my cum oozed out of my cock. Amy then instantly dropped her heel right onto the gimp sack, crushing his last testicle completely. She ground it from side to side and pumped her heel making sure it was completely destroyed. The gimp passed out again, I don't blame him. After firmly establishing his nut was no more, she yanked her foot forward, leaving the remains of his sack dangling on the ground and slid her heel strap back on. She seductively walked up to me, touching my chin and said
"I'm not through with you, I know you were about to go. I'll see you next week", she winked and left the room.

Anymous1
07-28-2012, 12:07 AM
Hey Kickpom

I really enjoyed reading your story and I sincerely hope that you continue the story onward for a long time. I particularly love the references to Amy overexerting herself and even getting physically tired kicking the slaves. I find it very sexy. I also enjoyed the periodic damage checks.

Thanks again for another good story.

:ibow4u::ibow4u::ibow4u:

slugbug
07-28-2012, 01:34 AM
great story, keep the good work up, sound like a great place to be:confused:

poolman2
07-29-2012, 02:54 AM
kickpom,

You've done another excellent story. Please do keep up this good work with another chapter. :bananajum

poolman2

kickthem
07-29-2012, 08:27 AM
FANTASTIC!!! Please, write more!

kickpom
07-30-2012, 05:21 AM
Thanks guys! The feedback is appreciated :)