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caravanshaker
07-25-2013, 05:56 PM
Hey, this is my first attempt at a story, it's only an introduction atm but hopefully posting that on here will spurr me into doing more in the coming month. Hope someone out there likes the sound of it, sorry if it's too boring. Feedback is welcomed, constructive preferrably. Any spelling/Grammar mistakes? Should I continue? Also can't think of a name yet. (Hopefully add a bit in the next week, have some ideas)


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There she was, lying in the bed opposite me in our small shared room. She had long fallen asleep but I always wait until she has fallen deep before thinking of her, she can’t catch me quite yet. My step-sister Alex. The most incredible, beautiful, sexy and terrifying woman I have ever laid eyes on, she knew how hot she was but had no idea what she was to me.

Her long, flowing, golden hair wisped gently off of her pillow, it was a hot night and she had moved in her sleep, her covers had fallen completely off and her body was exposed, only her skimpy pyjamas barely covering her. My eyes skimmed my favourite parts of her body, my excitement growing; her 36 E breasts looked perfect in the moonlight. I looked past her toned abdomen and exposed navel trying to catch a glimpse of her sweet pussy, no luck, just a peek of her landing strip protruding from her bottoms. Her thighs were to die for, she only stood at 5’ 4’’ but those legs were hot. I had long wished to feel their swift connection to my nether regions while I stared deep into her sensual blue eyes that always glinted with a touch of malice.

I suppose some information is in order. I had discovered my obsession with ballbusting reasonably young, only 13, when I was accidentally hit with a rounders ball by one of the girls at my school. The teachers made a big deal out of it and the girls’ all found it hilarious while the boys looked on with a kind of empathised pain. People rushed to check if I was alright, I was hunched over, not just in pain, but harbouring a semi. That night I went home and experimented hurting my balls and learned I also got excited from pain in my penis. I started to watch darker, more hardcore porn and over the years the line I thought was too hardcore drifted further away as I sank deeper into my fetish and began to explore and hurt myself more frequently as I wanked eventually building up the courage to do it when I came.

By 15 I was fantasising about all of the girls I know doing terrible, unspeakable things to my genitalia with all sorts of implements; at home, at school when everyone had gone home. I was watching darker things, even getting off to simulated c@stration and biting off of mens penises. I found a girl using her mouth as a tool to pleasure a man to the point of no return and then quickly chomp away his manhood to be the hottest thing on this planet. I could barely watch it for 30 seconds at the beginning before cumming.

My father married Alex’s mother when I was 14, we moved in together but not being rich we could only afford a small house, hence the shared room even to this day. We say it is a bit weird what with my being 17 and her being 19 going on 20 at a university close to where we live, but secretly I wouldn’t want it any other way. We didn’t get along really at all, we were civil to each other but you could tell there was no love there, it was a relationship born only out of our parents’. Although as we grew older I began to notice her more. Her tops began to fill out as she went through new bras like nobody’s business and her body became more feminine and sensual.

I on the other hand did not mature quite so well, I have grow to a reasonable 6’ 1’’ towering over her but am quite a scrawny chap, all skin and bone, luckily I filled out a bit in the downstairs department. She often crept into my fantasies as we grew and sometimes the two fantasies overlapped as my passions grew together. I would dream of her overpowering me and punishing me, slowly building to inflicting sick tortures on my body. It has now grown to the point where she is all I think about, when I watch porn I just imagine it is me there and she is doing those things to me.

Back to tonight. I now lie here, stroking my fully erect 8 inch cock. At 6 inches of girth my small hands barely fit around it. I began to lightly squeeze my testicles, the anticipation was too much, today was the day I let her catch me. I squeezed harder and blew my load in my boxers staring at her huge supple breasts, picturing my balls trapped between them as she crushes them, demolishes them with her mountainous mammaries and I spew all over her laughing face, pretending that was the pressure I currently felt around my balls. I had fantasised about this for years now. She would catch me and god knows what would happen. I had heard all sorts of stories and since then I have found her blog, but more about that later.

I hope this all goes to plan, my parents have just gone away for 5 days for an anniversary trip leaving us alone and now, thanks to me, her friends suspect me. She may think nothing of it… But hopefully… Hopefully she will and all my dreams will come true. Hopefully she will bust my balls until there is nothing left.