New ballbusting stories blog

[jonoffen]

Hi, just wanted to say I've made a site with my ballbusting stories on. There are plenty there so far (four completed the others at various stages). I will update these stories quite regularly (hopefully every weekend) so please feel free to take a look and comment.

The site is http://ballbustingstories.blogspot.com/

jonoffen

[DVant]

Wow, can't believe no one has commented yet. Guess I'll go first. You my good man have a brilliant pervy mind. And I bow to your greatness...

:ibow4u: :ibow4u: :ibow4u: :ibow4u: :ibow4u: :ibow4u: :ibow4u:

Had no idea you wrote the one about the School Babes. Although I can't remember where I read it before. It's remained one of my all time favs. In fact I gotta admit that all your stories are great. Even the incomplete ones. Hope you get a chance to finish the unfinished ones (esp. Coffee Shop & Holiday). And that you can keep writing new ones too. Thanks

BTW glad to see you have your own site, definitely gonna bookmark it.

[ron25]

Awesome blog! Thanks for the link, keep up the great stories!

[jonesr2]

God, the scrubs story with carla and elliot was so hot. I wish Sarah Chalk(sp?) would bust my balls. You really capturred her character too, can't wait for the fiinish.

[Knave]

Really nice Jonoffen! I especially like the big breasts anlge, it's one of my favorite themes!
Bravo, keep it up!

-Knave(EM)

[jonoffen]

Wow, erm, thanks everybody. I'm glad you all like them.
I'm really interested in which are you favourites as I jump from one favourite theme and set of characters to another quite often so let me know, on the blog or here's fine.

I just finished the Hermione's New School story, there's a good example of needing your feedback - I couldn't decide which ending worked best, so I went with my favourite, but added the alternate ending too so you can decide.

Thanks again and I'll make sure I keep posting my filth religiously.

[jonoffen]

Hi, I hope you've all had a chance to read my stuff.

I was wondering how people felt about the length of my stories?

Do you prefer short, sweet ones like Ballbusting School Babes; epic 26-pagers like Hermione's New School; or somewhere in between like Lilly's Lessons?

I ask because I noticed Hermione's New School isn't as popular as I hoped it would be (being my latest). Is it too long, is the theme too fantastical or is it something else?

Also, do you prefer ultra-realistic, slightly comedic (my fave) or complete fantasy ball-busting?

As I'm currently writing others, it would be great to hear you opinions.

[DVant]

The length of Hermione's New School wasn't a problem for me. I just didn't like the endings (sorry :( ). If I had to pick one I'd go with the alternate version, but tbh there wasn't enough busting in either of them. Also the reason for all her trouble making really didn't appeal to me. And neither did the back stabbing. Never thought she'd be that insecure. Putting that aside, I really did like the characters & I actually liked the way it started off. I'd love to see a continuation that was more... realistic(?). I mean the magic aspect was great and all, but when it comes down to it magic isn't really good for busting. IMO it kinda has to be more of a physical 'hands on' thing. An example would be the part with the driver where she used magic to set up the bust, but used the wrench for the actual act. The stomps towards the end were very good too. If you do decide to make a sequel maybe you can have the three girls form a 'unholy' trinity of ball busters. I'd also like to read in more detail about why Cho was expelled.

Anyway, to answer the other questions.

On the topic of length, it all depends on how the story flows. Some stories only work when things are kept short and to the point. Others work better when things are explained in great detail. I've read almost all of your stories, and so far I think you've done a fine job in figuring out which stories should be long. And which should be short.

As for what kind of story. I'd say realistic, (but not necessarily ultra) with some comedy mixed in are the ones I like best. As far as fantasy goes, it depends on the story. While a subject like magic works in HNS and The Charmed Ones. It might feel out of place in a story like The Coffee Shop or Ball Busting Vacation.

Hmmm, I hope all my rambling made sense... obviously this is all just my opinion. And some might have different likes or dislikes, but whatever. You just keep doing what you do.

[jonoffen]

Thaaaank you! Yeah, I see it now - nowhere near enough busting. Sigh. I'll have to take some lessons from porn - I hear there's a 15 minute max of how long it can go without sex. I'll make sure I use the principle on my next stories, but the truth is I like there to be a reason for what the characters are doing...maybe I'll have to have more characters busting balls for the fun of it :)

I also enjoy writing the tit/cunt busting and humiliation parts so sometimes balls are forgotten about for a little while. I try and find a balance.

Again, thank you for you feedback. It all helps!

[jonesr2]

I enjoy the humilation too. Love the wonderjugs story where she is mocking his small dick. I not a big fan of cunt busting, but I am just glad that you are writing the stories, so I will take what I can get. WHich is hopefully a couple of kicks:jumpsmile I like reading them all by the way, my favorites are any with celebs in them. Keep up the great work.

[jonoffen]

Just finished The Coffee Shop. I think this is one f my best as far as the balance between ball-busting and big tits goes.

As always give it a read and let me know what you think.

I see me doing a lot more like this (straight ball-busting/**********), but I always enjoy doing other stories with cunt/tit busting thrown in as well.

[skidge]

i just finished ballbusting school babes and ballbusting college babes and loved them

[sillyrabbit99]

they were all pritty good need some more jerking off tho

[jonoffen]

Just to let you know, I've updated Ballbusting Holiday (actaully had quite a lot of fun on that and have much more story to come) and also a small update to Invulneraballs with much more to come soon.

[darthsidius]

jonoffen,

I like your wrting style I also like the way you use humour. very good !!!

[Vittoria]

great stories! keep them coming! i wrote some similar ones but i never have time to update so i'll have fun with this :D

[petehstn]

My Darling Vittoria

I am sure we would ALL love to read your stories!!! If you dont want to post them please email them to me!! CBTPeteHstn at yahoo dot com

Pete

[jonoffen]

Hi all,

Just want to let you know I'm back to work on my blog after a break. A new story has been added and I hav plenty more I'll be finishing.
Expect updates every weekend.

In other news I'm having a go at a ballbusting flash game. It'll no doubt take some time, but I'll keep you updated. Here's some of the character artwork I've made so far:

[balla68]

woo hoo!! good to have ya back im going to go read now lol

[Dereknor]

Good to have you back :D

I'm watching your blog each day and hope for updates.

And finish the Ballbusting Holidays storie!!! ;)

[coolnitin]

Good find....very nice stories...I just looked it

[mulder1369]

OOO very nice, wonderfull:iluvu:

[jonoffen]

Just wanted to let you know I've finished the Nat's Heavyweights story in case you've been following it.

I'm always anxious about what people think of the ending so give it a go.

Kisses :)

[Richter]

I liked the end of Nat's Heavyweights. Combined a lot of my loves in one story. Love females on the wrestling team type stuff.

[clicker123]

im so fond of your work im always checking it for updates i was so happy you finished my absolute fav...nat's heavyweight of course :D plz write something new also i love your work....im also reading lily's first time and ballbusting holiday.

[jonoffen]

I've finished the Lara Croft story and if you haven't checked back in a while there have been a few other updates and additions such as a completed new story called The Little Bitch and a sequel all ready started and an update to Ball-busting University Babes.

[dmac17]

I love your stories... and I'm still kinda hoping you finish the scrubs one with carla and elliot. By far one of your best!

[SneakyNinjaCow]

I've been reading your stories for quite a while, I like quite a few of them, but not all of them. Call me squeamish. Still great work though, looking forwards to checking out more.

[jonoffen]

Booya! Finished Ball-busting University Babes which wraps up the My Education trilogy of stories.

I get the feeling that I'll be going back to it somewhere down the line because I'm not totally happy with it. For instance, I would have prefered to extend Donna's blowjob scene with a little face-sitting, but, hey, let me know what you think.

I've got an new story burning a hole in my brain, but I've promised myself I'll get a few more finished first.

ballbustingstories.blogspot.com (http://ballbustingstories.blogspot.com/)

[Teardrop]

Booya! Finished Ball-busting University Babes which wraps up the My Education trilogy of stories.
Thanks for the update, Jonoffen.

Good things often come in threes (the original Star Wars, The Omen films, etc). The latest part of your trilogy is excellent. Gonna take me ages to read all your stories!

[TVEE]

WOW :bananajum Awesome :ibow4u::ibow4u::ibow4u:
Keep it up ,:)

[slpy4]

awesome work jonoffen.. i hope you manage to make a new school uniform update soon. that one has a great beginning

[femmefatale1983]

This site has been taken down I guess...:confused:

[smackMyNuts]

It appears to have moved here (http://www.s163991191.websitehome.co.uk/).

[bb04]

Thank-you for re-linking. I had missed that site, they had some good stuff. But, it seemed like they hadn't updated in ages... I figured the site had been abandoned.

[jonoffen]

My site has definately not been abandoned, although for a while there I didn't know how i could carry on after google blocked my blog.

I'm sorry I didn't let you guys know about the new site, for some reason I assumed I had.

The big updates since the blog went down have been Overqualified: Gemma's First Job and New School Uniform so check them out.

Cheers

Jonoffen

[Dereknor]

I hope for more updates soon. You write my favourit ballbusting stories :)

still watching your blog at last once a week for years now

[jonesr2]

Finish the Eiilliot and Carla Scrubs ballbust story PLEASE!!!!!!!

[jonoffen]

Sorry I've been away, but I've just release a mammoth update.

Ball-busting Stories (http://www.s163991191.websitehome.co.uk/)

[SupaCanibizz]

Any updates coming up? It's been a long time :(

[Dereknor]

I hope for some updates too :( Jonoffens stories are my favourit ballbusting stories!

Still watching the site at last 3 times a week in hope for updates :)

[Mythical Pain]

Sorry I've been away, but I've just release a mammoth update.

Ball-busting Stories (http://www.s163991191.websitehome.co.uk/)

Thanks for the update and the new link! Great looking stuff so far, what I've had a chance to read of it!

Ever consider anything in a different setting? Say a chaste maiden kicking the crap out of the balls of an untoward knight who thinks the wrong way about women?

Or even a female knight demolishing the balls of the local wicked dragon after her brags to her about princesses he's kidnapped or proclaims she's unworthy to fight him, cause she's "just a girl" Hehe.

[curiousj]

Sorry I've been away, but I've just release a mammoth update.

Ball-busting Stories (http://www.s163991191.websitehome.co.uk/)

Thanks for the new link and updates jonoffen. I've been away for a while and look forward to reading this new material!

[jonoffen]

Hi guys, thanks for the comments.

I wanted to let you know that my lack of updates was only due to me finishing The Coffee Wars in one go so that I could sell it. It's £3 or $4.60ish so it's not too expensive I hope. I would like to have charged less, but Lulu take a £1.50 cut no matter what I charge and I couldn't stand them making more money than me for my own work.

This won't be a regular thing - just wanted to make a bit of money for my efforts over the past few years.

I'm working on my next update which I'm really enjoying writing so shouldn't take too long.

[Dereknor]

I think I will buy that story ;)

whats about the other stories in that store? Are they the same as on your website? Or are there any more we should know about that we can buy? ;)

[jonoffen]

The other stories are the same ones you've read for free. I just put them up there to catch people who might not have discovered my site or those who have but feel like making a donation in a round about way.

[lorelei100]

The other stories are the same ones you've read for free. I just put them up there to catch people who might not have discovered my site or those who have but feel like making a donation in a round about way.
WIll you please finish the balls for a day story its great!

[Dereknor]

you should have a paypal account, so people could give you money without lulu getting half of the money you deserve ;)

[Odust]

Sadly, PayPal doesn't want his custom.

[jonoffen]

Hey, guys

There's new shit up on my site: Balls for a Day gets a beefy update.

Enjoy

Jonoffen

PS Thanks to those of you who bought Coffee Shop 2 - let me know what you thought of it!

[jonoffen]

Hi

I've posted a few big updates to Balls for a Day since I last dropped by, plus the site's had be bit of a revamp.

Jonoffen

[jonoffen]

Hi

I uploaded a huge update for Over-qualified: Gemma's First Job so enjoy.

Oh, and I've got myself a decent domain now so you should have no trouble remembering it: www.ballbustingstories.co.uk

[~Jin~]

The site now needs an email and a password to be able to read them. I was a frequent there before Blogger messed with it. D: I can't read the updates now...

[jonoffen]

The site now needs an email and a password to be able to read them. I was a frequent there before Blogger messed with it. D: I can't read the updates now...

Hi Jin,

Sorry I don't follow. The site doesn't need a password and I haven't had anyone else mention that it has.

Just follow the link in my signature and you should be fine.

Let me know if not (anyone) and I'll try to figure out what is going on.

[jonoffen]

Hey, Merry Christmas!
What have I got for you in my stocking? A 1500 word update to Overqualified, that's what. Find out what's going to happen to Gemma and what happened to poor old Stuart. And in the spirit of goodwill to all men, could you drop me an email letting me know your thoughts on this or any story - I'd love to hear from you.

[Jakdago]

Wow!i read your stories and liked them very much!this is truely a fantastic blog!hope you'll continue Elliot and Carla's Adventure,it promise to be one of the best stories i've ever read!
(http://www.ballbustingstories.co.uk/Elliot.html)

[jonoffen]

I've been extremely productive this past month bringing to a fantastic end Over-qualified: Gemma's First Job.

What you’re missing out on:

Having fled the club, Gemma finds herself in an even stickier situation, but luckily she has a guardian angel in the form of Judie who convinces the ill-treated teen to seek revenge. Judie deals with the doorman, much the delight of a queuing hen party, but in doing so risks exposing a secret she’d rather no one knew.
Once inside, Gemma takes on Lisa who ends up with something very big lodged somewhere very painful. Finally, the blondes disrupt Chelsea giving Gareth a blowjob and you can imagine what happens next... or can you?

[notstephencolbert]

Great site, dude. Hot stories. Please keep it going

[jonoffen]

Hi. I've started a cracking new Coffee Shop story and in case you've missed it I added a new short story just over a month ago.

[Youthmane]

I get in error

"This blog is in violation of Blogger's Terms of Service and is open to authors only" :confused: :confused:

[jonoffen]

I get in error

"This blog is in violation of Blogger's Terms of Service and is open to authors only" :confused: :confused:

Where are you trying to go? My site is www.ballbustingstories.co.uk (http://www.ballbustingstories.co.uk). The link is in my signature.

[Youthmane]

Where are you trying to go? My site is www.ballbustingstories.co.uk (http://www.ballbustingstories.co.uk). The link is in my signature.

oh now it works. the first link was acting odd. saying I couldn't go there.


Thanks. :jumpsmile

now that i see the Stories off, I've been here B4. awhile ago.

[jonoffen]

If you haven't visited my story site in a while there are two new stories up.

If you visit regularly, I just updated The Coffee Shop IV: The Milkmaids.

[WhispyWillow]

Oh neat o.o I've never stumbled across this blog, thanks! ^^ I'll have to really sit down n' read a few of these later today

[tobedommed]

love the new additions, keep it going

[jonoffen]

Hi guys,

I've just finished The Coffee Shop 4: The Milkmaids and it's on sale now £3.75 or just under $6.

Also, for a short time, The Coffee Wars and Overqualified: Gemma's First Job are half price for those of you who haven't found out how those end.

I'm working on The Coffee Shop 5: The Hangover now and it will be completely free you'll be glad to hear :)

Thanks to everyone who has purchased anything in the past and supporting the site.

[Johnni]

Hi guys,

I've just finished The Coffee Shop 4: The Milkmaids and it's on sale now £3.75 or just under $6.

Also, for a short time, The Coffee Wars and Overqualified: Gemma's First Job are half price for those of you who haven't found out how those end.

I'm working on The Coffee Shop 5: The Hangover now and it will be completely free you'll be glad to hear :)

Thanks to everyone who has purchased anything in the past and supporting the site.

Do you accept bitcoins?

[jonoffen]

Do you accept bitcoins?

No, mate sorry. To be honest, I've not even heard of them before - had to look them up. Lulu accepts most major credit/debit cards and Paypal if that helps.

I should also add that if you want some more of the Milkmaids story then follow the link below and check out the story's preview as there is more there which I haven't published.

http://stores.lulu.com/store.php?fAcctID=4244703

[jonoffen]

Time for a semi-regular update.
Over the last month or so I've updated Balls for a Day and two big ones for Little Bitch III which I'm really proud of (the last update added today). So if you haven't visited in a while there should be plenty to read.

Also thanks to everyone who has been buying the few of the stories I sell. My site doesn't allow for your comments unfortunately (I have no idea how to set it up on my own site), but I hope you are enjoying them and you can aways let me know here or at my email address holy_hell at hotmail.co.uk

[jonoffen]

Hi guys, sorry for the wait, but I have an update for you: Little Bitch 3. It's not the one I intended to release, but as always happens I got tempted by a different story and then another. The upshot is that Little Bitch 3 is complete with alternate happy and unhappy endings, Balls for a Day will be receiving a big update soon, but Whore and Order, an all new short story about a maverick female cop, is still some way off being finished.

Hope you enjoy the alternate endings which are given in the style of news reports.

[jonoffen]

Finally, The Coffee Shop 5: The Hangover is available to buy at my new shop. It's the first time I've used tinypay.me, but it should hopefully mean I get to keep all the money I make rather than paying half to so-called publishers.

Please enjoy the new (as of 31 Dec) 5000 word free instalment which I hope will make you eager to read more!

[jonoffen]

Finally, The Coffee Shop 5: The Hangover is available to buy at my new shop. It's the first time I've used tinypay.me, but it should hopefully mean I get to keep all the money I make rather than paying half to so-called publishers.

Please enjoy the new (as of 31 Dec) 5000 word free instalment which I hope will make you eager to read more!

UPDATE: Sorry guys I didn't notice I had to set the "unlimited sales" setting so the story sold out after one sale. Doh! Anyway, it's all sorted now.

Cheers

[jonoffen]

I published a new and original story last month and have now given it a huge update. I hope you enjoy it. Let me know what you think.

[crushmynutsflat]

I buy all ur stories, but id like to see bb holiday update, and balls for a day those are personal favs. but what happened to the pics u used to have as well? the "dont be afraid to make a mess" picture has a friend of mine who wasnt into ballbusting laughing. Kinda helped me introduce her lol

[jonoffen]

I buy all ur stories, but id like to see bb holiday update, and balls for a day those are personal favs. but what happened to the pics u used to have as well? the "dont be afraid to make a mess" picture has a friend of mine who wasnt into ballbusting laughing. Kinda helped me introduce her lol

Ha! I forgot about that one. Wow, you really showed that pic to a non-ball-busting female friend? That was pretty brave. What made you think she would find it amusing?

For anyone who didn't see the sight here it is: http://ballbustingpictures.blogspot.com/

I have been thinking of putting all my works on my own site and this has definitely given me the urge to do it.

[crushmynutsflat]

yea I used the old this is a self defense pic from a women's self defense class line lol

[Sockmess]

Can't wait for the final chapter!

[jonoffen]

Can't wait for the final chapter!

Holy crap, I've surprised myself - I've just added another 5000+ word update to Swinging Beef to take it right up to the final scene. Check it out and I'll see you all for the exciting conclusion! :p

[eyalkk]

i would'va given you a feedback trought the site but i don't see where is the space for this (at the other site you could do it at the end of the story i remember), so this is one point.
and for the story, i think it's great as always:ibow4u: , although the school babes are my favorites (and please, please please, ball-busting holliday, please), besides, everything with brother sister theme is doing it for me

[thisis4bbb]

i would'va given you a feedback trought the site but i don't see where is the space for this (at the other site you could do it at the end of the story i remember), so this is one point.
and for the story, i think it's great as always:ibow4u: , although the school babes are my favorites (and please, please please, ball-busting holliday, please), besides, everything with brother sister theme is doing it for me

I second this.

[jonoffen]

The story Swinging Beef is now complete. Enjoy at your own convenience.

[tobi]

and once again a great story ^ ^ Thank you very much

[Dereknor]

nice nice nice :D I love all the ballbusting stories!

[Strange_Fool_215]

Under the circumstances, Farley's lucky he got away with one left...

[jonoffen]

Hi guys, been a while, I know.

There's a new story on my site I added a few days ago and have just updated. 5000+ words which almost entirely detail the terrible testicle torture one young man suffers at the hands of his gorgeous flatmates.

Enjoy.

[jonoffen]

Another big update to "Flat".

[jonoffen]

Merry Christmas! I got you a present: the story Flat 100% finished.

[honto]

Don't let this thread die!

[jonoffen]

I won't honto!

I've just finished Sneaky Nuts over at my site. Came in at 4x the intended length, but I'm sure you won't complain.

[bobkeoki]

Thank you, Jonoffen. Your stories are always very entertaining and well written. I am looking forward to seeing what happens in "Whore and Order" (perhaps a police raid?).

[tkdwN]

Yes was nice stories indeed. Hopefully there will be more to come