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gopballbuster
10-01-2007, 10:42 PM
Note: Parts of the story inspired by the story The Freeloader http://femaledom.com/forum/showthread.php?t=4290
And A College Ballbusting Story
http://femaledom.com/forum/showthread.php?t=3985&highlight=college+ballbusting+story


The Cheater
Sara was 26 years old, and living in Washington DC. She had just graduated from George Washington University, and spending four years in the US Army. Sara was about 5’9 and 120 lbs, dark brown hair, and blue eyes. She was born in a Washington DC suburb to a government worker and a housewife. She had one brother Eric, whom she constantly fought with both out of boredom and out of anger. Eric was 28 and 6’3, 190 lbs, even when they were younger, he was always bigger, and generally won the fight. Sara just thought to use the typical girl moves of slapping and scratching in the fights, but this did not work very well at all.
This all changed one day in 8th grade, when her friend Megan’s old boyfriend kept pestering her to go to the dance with her. Megan was 5’7, 100 lbs, blonde hair, and green eyes; one of the most beautiful girls in school. Megan did not want to have anything to do with Rob, as he was a jerk. Finally, one day, Rob caught Megan in a bad mood, and asked her if she would go to the dance. Slam! Her tennis shoe slammed into his balls. He fell on the floor crying, and clutching his balls. All the girls around there began to laugh at Rob’s bad luck. Everyone just went upon their business, leaving poor Rob to get to his next class on time (which he did not do). Seeing this gave Sara an idea.
Later that evening, Sara told the story to Eric, which made Eric kind of cover his balls. Sara noticed this and said, “Do you think you could stand up to that you big wimp?” “I could you dumb bitch” Eric said. Sara the pretended to kick him, but did not make contact. About an hour later, Sara walked up and gave Eric a snap kick in the nuts; he went to the ground in a great deal of pain. Sara then just said, “I guess the little fuck can’t handle it.” Despite this incident, Eric and Sara still have a good relationship and still talk to each other.
After graduating high school, Eric went to college, but Sara joined the army. She had a strong sense of patriotism. She went to basic training at Ft. Leonard Wood, Missouri. While there she learned a great deal about self defense and hand to hand combat, more than just the kick in the balls. Sara became an MP (Military Police) and served her first few years in Germany. She was sent to Afghanistan after September 11th. She finally got out of the army, but was forever changed.
Sara had discovered something in the army; she had seen her share of “hot” guys, but never a “hot” woman. She saw this in the army. She realized she was bisexual; she vowed to herself to never act on this, to marry a man, and have a normal life.
After getting out of the army, Sara attended the George Washington University in Washington, DC. She received her degree in political science, and was working as a staffer for a member of the House from Virginia. Sara moved into an apartment in Alexandra, Virginia (just south of Washington DC) with a roommate, Melanie. Melanie was not quite as beautiful as Sara, but nothing anyone would just pass on the street. They both worked as Congressional aides; about the only problem they had was that Sara worked for a Republican, and Melanie worked for a Democrat. They would often get into political debates. One day, October of 2006, they both discovered they were both bisexual.
They would do some types of sexual activities, but never sex. They both discovered something else, they loved to bust balls. They would attempt to get the boyfriends to let them ballbust them, but they never would. Finally, Sara met a man who, at first seemed normal, but was a pervert underneath. His name was Chris, and he worked as an accountant to the General Accounting Office. What Sara did not know was that Chris was a sex manic. She found this out when she borrowed his laptop to do some work on, and discovered the vast amount of lesbian porn. She was mad at first, but then thought this could be used to her advantage.
Later that day, after she got home, she told the story to Melanie. Sara then told Melanie of her plan, to tell Chris what she had found. Melanie said, “Don’t do that, he will think you’re mad!” Sara then said she would say she would then immediately say she was not mad, but rather she found it very hot. She would then say to him, “My roommate and I are both bisexual, and will make out four an hour in front of you if you will do us a little favor.” “What is this favor?” Melanie said. “Ballbusting.” Sara said. Melanie agreed this was the perfect plan.
Sara called Chris and said she wanted to meet him now. Chris said he was too busy, and could not make it. Sara had a simple reply, “I’m horny baby.” Chris was there in ten minutes. When Chris got there, he found Sara dressed like a dominatrix, with a leather coat, leather pants, black stiletto boots, and leather gloves. Melanie was simply dressed in a pink sports bra, black running pants with a white stripe down the leg, and pink and silver Puma tennis shoes.
When Chris saw all this, his mouth fell open, and Sara looked down and saw there was a dark spot where his massive cock was. She said, “Are you hot baby?” Chris could do nothing more than nod his head. Sara said, “Here’s the deal, I found all the lesbian porn on your computer.” Chris began to get an extremely worried look on his face. “Don’t worry about it baby, I loved it.” Chris then had a smile come over his face. Sara then said Melanie and I will make out for an hour, then we each get an hour to kick/slap/knee/punch your balls, then we will make out for another hour. “Fuck yeah!” Chris said
Thus the make-out session began. Sara and Melanie both stripped and made out in the bedroom, not only on the bed, but on the floor, and just about everywhere they could in the bedroom. Chris took his pants off and began to jack off. He could barely control the steam of cum coming out of his dick. He was having the best orgasm he had ever had. He got cum all over the floor. In what seemed like a second, it had been an hour. “When you say kick/slap/knee/punch your balls, you don’t mean **********, do you?” Chris inquired. “Of course not, I need something to kick later.” Sara said
“Let’s get too it” Sara said. Chris felt a fear sweep over him, but he thought how great the second make out session would be. It took Sara a second to put her leather cat woman like suit back on. Chris looked at Sara’s five inch high black leather boots, and Melanie’s silver and pink Puma shoes and was glad he had been guaranteed he would not be *********. It started out with Sara and Melanie flipping a coin to find out who would go first. Melanie won, but Chris had an idea. He said “How about if I can fight you off, you have to make out for all of the ballbusting time?” Sara then added, “But if you lose, we don’t make out, and we ballbust.” “Okay” Chris said, but Melanie was a little more apprehensive. She finally aggraded after both Sara and Chris begged her. Sara though she would get an hour and a half of ballbusting, Chris though he had three hours of lesbian make out time.
Melanie stepped up and attempted her first kick, but Chris simply stepped aside. Almost as if a light went off in her head, Melanie had an idea. She knew the rubber soles of her Pumas were very hard. She walked up and kicked again, again Chris dogged it, but that’s when Melanie struck, using the bottom of her shoe, she crushed his balls against his pelvic bone. Chris let out a high pitched shriek, and fell. Melanie then grabbed his legs and spread them eagle. Sara, Melanie, and Chris all knew what was coming next. Melanie first stomped on his poor defenseless balls ten times, then she dropped her knee on them ten times. Chris was fading in and out of coconscious, but Melanie had come up with a brilliant idea any time he did this. Both Sara and Melanie were dripping wet, so Melanie thought pussy juice would wake him up, it did. Melanie then held his cock, and crushed his balls between her Puma and the floor. He passed out again, nearly being *********, but the pussy juices worked. Melanie could not believe it, but it had nearly been an hour.
Sara stepped up, clad in leather, looking like Trinity from The Matrix. She walked up to him and dropped a bombshell on him. She knew his secret, he cheated on her. “What a fucking wonderful time for me to bust your balls” said Sara. Chris knew if he made it out with his balls, it was miraculous. Sara started by standing on his nipples with her stiletto boots. This hurt like hell, and Chris screamed. Sara said, “Maybe we should gag him, we don’t want the neighbors hearing this.” The idea came too late. After Chris was gagged with a pair of Sara’s panties, there was a knock at the door. Melanie, Chris, and Sara all knew who it was, or at least they though. They all thought it was a neighbor checking and making sure everything was all right. Sara tied up Chris with some rope, and put him in the closet, while Sara, all dressed in leather, hid in the bathroom. Melanie went to answer the door, thinking it was just a concerned neighbor. It was a police officer. Melanie’s heart just about stopped. She had never even gotten a ticket, let alone been arrested.
Melanie then noticed something wonderful, it was a woman cop. She said her name was Officer Armstrong, and she just was checking up on a woman screaming call. Melanie said everything was all right, but the officer knew she was lying. She asked if she could come in a take a look around. Melanie said she could, but she would find nothing. At first, she looked around the living room, kitchen, and dining room. She then moved into the hall and saw a closed door. She asked what that was, and was told it was the bathroom. She still was not sold, and said “Police, open the door” Out came a nervous Sara, dressed in all-leather. The officer then went into the bedroom, and found a naked, gagged man in the closet. The officer asked what was all this, and Sara replied, “This is a sex game we play, and he was cheating on me.” As soon as she said it, she knew she should not have. The officer then said, “Cheater, eh” She then kicked him in the ribs, and told the women to isolate one nut and pop it. She then left.
Chris now knew he would not leave with his balls. Sara continued her work, beating Chris all over his body. She used her heal to kick his eyes, and teeth. She kicked him so hard in the stomach that it began to bleed. The final insult came when Sara took her leather-gloved hand and broke his penis. She then took his left nut under her five inch, stiletto leather boot heal. She then told Melanie to take her silver and pink Puma sole and put it on his right nut. One the count of three Sara said, push down as hard as you can. One, two, Chris had never been so terrified in his life, three. “Good buy man hood” Sara said. Chris passed out from the pain; put again the pussy juice brought him back. Both Sara and Melanie were as wet as could be. Sara and Melanie broke their oath, and had sex. Right in front of Chris, but it did not matter, his penis was broken, and both his balls were popped.

ohowtheyhurt
10-01-2007, 10:59 PM
I loved the pussy juice technique, if I'm ever passed out that's what I want to be smelling when I awaken...Better than "napalm in the morning"...
-Oh :thumbup

gopballbuster
10-01-2007, 11:18 PM
thank you, that means a lot coming from one of the greatest bb authors i have ever read

Odust
10-01-2007, 11:38 PM
Excellent story! Very nice. I always like it when the men are arrogant about their toughness or prowess before being put in their place. Oh, and I love characters named Sara. Further, I am honored that you found inspiration in my work.

Now on to a bit of criticism, because I always like to receive constructive criticism myself. When referencing their imaginative alternative to smelling salts, repeated use of 'pussy juice' becomes redundant. Though everyone is undoubtedly familiar with the juices you speak of, you might try referring only to the scent or perhaps they might change it up, rubbing some from their fingers onto his lips. Because I like alliteration far too much, I probably would've gone with something like 'Though his world was quickly slipping into darkness, the strong scent of Sara's snatch...' Or you could just be silly 'the strong scent of Sara's sopping snatch swiftly snapped him from his slumber' but that's taking the s's a bit too far.

gopballbuster
10-02-2007, 02:54 PM
thank you, i appreciate people leaving any comment, good or bad, as long as it helps me write a better story in the future

mick_sl8ter
10-02-2007, 02:58 PM
I would rather rent the movie.

When will you film this story ?

Benny12
10-02-2007, 02:58 PM
Nice story. Yeah, that was a pretty good idea about the pussy juice. :D Keep up the good work.:jumpsmile

gopballbuster
10-02-2007, 04:42 PM
well mick_sl8ter, get me some actors – benny12, thanks

linklierok
10-03-2007, 06:40 AM
I liked it a lot, very good and erotic for a perv like me who loves the thought of being popped.


BUT: My nitpicks: this line made me laugh and killed the moment “Good buy man hood” I'm sure you meant "bye". :D

Also I always dislike when stories like this have tremendously great lead in, but then when it comes down to the most destructive parts (the breaking the cock and popping the balls), there's very little description of it.

Its just my opinion but I like it when the story gets to a part like that, time almost slows to a crawl there and takes time to describe what the girls are feeling, what the guy is feeling, what it looks/sounds like. Not to a redundant degree like a lot of posts on here ask for hehe, just like a femdom slow-mo money shot if you catch my drift. :o

gopballbuster
10-03-2007, 07:49 PM
i never even noticed how i put "good buy"