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bigballs08
07-12-2008, 01:13 AM
Pornstar Vengence:A Change Of Plans

It was a typical day in the studios for the adult industry.In a room stood five of the most popular studs in porn.I happened to be working for the cleanup crew,what a job lemme tell ya!Anyhow there I was hanging out with those five guys it was...Lee stone,Peter North,Vodo,Julian,and Lex Steele.It came to me as no surprise to hear them talking about how tight the chicks were and what good head they gave and all that stuff.Meanwhile in the dressing room were three hot babes...Julia Bond,Cherokee,and Jewel Denyle.They were all about to do the biggest scene of thier lives.They were to take on the five guys I mentioned.I passed by the door and heard the girls talking about how nervous they were.A couple of hours passed and it was now time for the girls to put out,so to speak.The girls went into a bedromm set and sat on the bed.The guys walked in completley naked and ready for sex.The girls began smiling and giggling.The men were annoyed by thier laughter.Lee walked over to Julia and said suck my cock baby.Julia opened her pretty little mouth and began slowly sucking his cock.Julian told Jewel to suck his cock,Jewel wrapped her lips around Julian's cock and begansucking so hard her Julian was already moaning.Lex took Cherokee by the head,and she opened her mouth as she smiled and began sucking his cock.Peter and Vodo were squeezing on Jewels big beautiful tits,I was watching this and I couldn't help but get hard.The guys were stripping the chicks until they were all maked.Lee began to throat fuck Julia and the other guys pinned the remaining girls down.The girls began screaming,as they knew what was coming when they saw Julia getting gagged by Lee's cock,and her eyes rolling to the back of her head as she struggled.Lee removed his cock from Julia's mouth.Julia shouted stop! please don....Lee shoved his cock back inside her mouth.Julia's masscara was running due to her eyes watering from her gagging,or maybe it was actuall tears from shame,and being violated.I knew this was wrong but at the same time I had a strange arousal inside.While Lee was facefucking Julia,Peter began fucking Julia's ass hard.She tried to scream,but Lee's cock muffled her voice.Lee then began fucking her ass too,Peter and Lee both were pounding Julia's ass as she cried in pain,Julia passed out and was relieved as they rolled her from the bed onto the floor.Lee grabbed Jewel as Lex and Vodoo hel back Cherokee who watched in fear,because she knew what was about to happen and she also knew she would be next.Lee began throat fucking Jewel,as Peter and Vodo worked on Cherokee.Jewel and Cherokee were already in pain,and Slobbering on everyones cock they were all fucked and drained from energy,as they too were rolled onto the floor with Julia.Peter said here it comes bitches.Peter Sprayed julia in the face with his hot blasting cum,gluing her eyes shut.Peter kept cumming on Julia's face and managed to give Jewel a good portion of his spunk all in her face.Lex began throat fucking Cherokee ******* her to swallow every last bit of his cum.Vodo,Julian,and Lee all gathered around the girls plastering thier faces with thier cum and shooting alot of it into thier mouth,the guys left the set,but the girls lay there in pain and cum covered faces.I was the only one left in the room.The director came in and yelled at me,What the fuck happened.I answered I dont know.I was new to this and I was even paying attention but the cameras were not rolling.this was not a scene this was for thier satisfaction,and I explained that to theme.The paramedics arrived as I stood thier the girls passed me,and each of them looked at me with a wicked gaze in thier eyes.It was as if thier eyes were saying to me...how could you let this happen to us.The girls were carried out and taken to the hospital to take care of anal injuries.The girls recovered and were all hanging out one day and they decided to take revenge.They got into a car and carried a baseball bat with them.Julia said first stop,Lee Stone's place.They pulled up to Lee's house at night fall and they walked up to his living room window and saw him watching tv.They busted in and Julia yelled,you son of a bitch...you are gonna pay you fuck.Julia swung the bat with all of her might right into Lee's balls,dropping him to his kness in much more pain than he had inflicted to any of the girls.Lee screamaed like a girl,and put his hand down in his pants and noticed Julia had completley busted his right nut,Lee looked up at Julia as she smiled at him.Lee cried,you busted my nut.Julia said,good thats one down and one to go then isn't it?Lee said please dont,please...I'll do anything you want.Jewel said,ok.Jewel instructed Lee to roll onto his stomach.He did as he was told.Cherokee Jerked Lee's pants hurting his busted balls.Cherokee They saw he only had one nut and began laughing.Jewel shouted oh my god,look that looks so fucking wierd.Cherokee grabbed it and said,ewww it feels like jelly.Lee cried as they humilated him.Lee was on his stomach.Cherokee yelled at him and told him to keep his face flat on the ground.Julia took the bat and just shoved it into Lee's ass.Lee's ass began to bleed instantly,as he screamed in a high pitched voice.Jewel helped Julia move the bat in and out of Lee's ass,while Cherokee Squeezed the remaining nut,the nut broke in Cherokee's fingers.Cherokee was surprised it broke,as she giggled and said,opps.Cherokee then rolled him over onto his back to stroke his big cock.Even though Lee had lost his balls his cock was rock hard.All of the girls began stroking his cock.Lee began to cum but he looked down to see he wasn't cumming.Cherokkee taunted him saying,awwww poor thing his cock can only throb and punp air out.The girls walked out and left him lying there.They approached thier next victim.They had arrived at Peter North's house.They walked up to the living room window and saw him jacking off.This time they did not bust into the house they creeped up on him as he countinued to jerk his cock.Peter had his eyes closed,Julia kneeled quitley between his legs with a knife and quickly grabbed his balls and said,dont you fucking move you fucker!Peter sat in his chair letting go of his cock.Julia said,no please keep jacking off this should be fun.Julia rammed the knife into his balls tearing his sac,she sliced through his chords.Peter screamed.Peter let go of his cock,but Julia took control,she had cut both balls out they were on the floor.Julia teased peter as she continued to jerk his cock,she said...I want your cum all over my face,he began to cum,but just like Lee,nothing came out and Julia anad the other girls were laughing.Peter was left with no balls.Lex was an Easy target.He was having sex on set one day and Jewel grabbed his balls from behind,and stabbed them with a knife causing serious problem,and Lex had to have them removed.Vodo was another eay target,he was onset with his wife.His wife was inside a car giving him head.Vodo stood there with his cock hanging out.Nichile went over to the passenger side of the car to find her earing.Cherokee came out of nowhere and slammed Vodo's cock in the car door.Vodo's cock was cut completley off by the door.His wife was going hysterical.Last stop was Julian only they couldn't find him.Apparenyl he was the smart one and decided to hide for a while.They came in on the same set I was working on and ask me if I had seen Julian.I told them I hadent seen him in a while.Julia said what about him.Jewel said yeah he'll do.Whack all of a sudden I was out like a light.I found myself naked and surrounded by the three hot babes looking at my already hard cock.Julia even sstoked my cock for a minute.Cherokee came over to me with a baseball bat and explained to me they had ********* all but one of the guys.I wonder if thats why they abducted me?

gopballbustеr2
07-12-2008, 05:59 AM
Reading that hurt my eyes due to no paragraphs. My erection went away.:eek:

snakeskin
07-13-2008, 05:53 AM
Dude, how can you type something that long without paragraphs ?

I'm not even gonna read it.... Exponentiate that and image how many others are gonna pass on it too than cause themselves a headache (LITERALLY)

I'm sure it's a nice story though, so kudos for the effort.

Fix your editing though.

gopballbustеr2
07-13-2008, 09:06 AM
Did you lose your erection too, snakeskin?

daradles
07-13-2008, 10:28 AM
I enjoyed the story, but I agree that you might want to structure it a bit more. It certainly gets confusing if you lose your place in your story. Having said that, I do look forward to where you take your next story.

gopballbuster
07-13-2008, 10:32 AM
Repudiating what the fake gopballbuster said, I enjoyed the story. Although, if you're looking for some constrictive criticism, breaking up the paragraphs would be nice.