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Dreihundert

01-19-2009, 06:36 PM

One of my First Stories.

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/B/ea_193336ballbust.htm

Please give me constructive feedback. I write under the pen name "Ike Richardson"

misterjover

01-19-2009, 08:01 PM

Excellent story! I love the whole "popping" ordeal.

daradles

01-19-2009, 09:47 PM

What a violent start to your story writing career. Keep up the good work.

P.S. I also loved the popping!

patrick_hh

01-21-2009, 12:04 PM

Great story! Got some more of that?

sarah68

01-22-2009, 08:22 PM

very very good story

hcs

01-23-2009, 02:19 PM

One of my First Stories.

http://www.eunuch.org/Alpha/B/ea_193336ballbust.htm

Please give me constructive feedback. I write under the pen name "Ike Richardson"
Interesting story. Thanks, hcs