Fooled

skweezme,

In a number of your stories, the tormenters had at least a friendly relationship with their victim's wife.

I'd love to see a sequel with the wife playing some role in her husband's torture. It could be as little as knowingly making him available for the tormenters use and abuse. The husband would of course be emphatically ordered to satisfy his abusers.

Perhaps this is a sort of dominatrix wife's lend/lease program for us S&M aficionados. :jumpsmile

Best wishes,

poolman2

Nice idea! Getting his wife involved. A bit complicated, though. Why and how would she get drawn into this? Hmmm...have to see if a story emerges.

Glad you all like the stories. I'm still not confident about writing from an embodied female point-of-view. Which is why a Reality Check from any female readers would be brilliant. PM me if you don't want a public discussion.

:)

Skweezme,

Keeping in mind that I lack your creative imaginativeness and literary skills, here are a few ideas that come to mind:

1. Hubby limps home and complains of his femdom torture. His wife is incensed at his failure to respect her sex, not to mention his wimpiness and whining. Naturally she excoriates him for such behavior and then contacts her two friends to arrange for regular future sessions down the line. She has been too busy with her own career to give him the attention he so clearly requires. These sessions will toughen him up and instill discipline and respect for female supremacy.

2. Hubby limps home and complains of his femdom torture. His wife is upset that he was not more sensitive to the needs and interests of her sister and friend. He clearly was not willing to make any self-sacrifices to help others. She will design a plan to provide him with more structure and discipline so that he will see the wisdom of deferring to his betters, namely those of the female sex. She will of course require the assistance of girl friends and sisters to ensure a range of experiences that is both broad and in depth.

3. Wife’s sister/relative/friend/co-worker/female other, has recently been abused/disrespected/neglected /allowed to become sad or lonely as a consequence of the conduct of men. Wife will redress this situation by lending (or even better yet, leasing for profit) her husband. He can be used or abused as the second woman wishes. He can be her consort, lover, humiliated male inferior/slave, or even victim of her sadistic sexual torture, whatever she may wish.

4. Wife and her girl friends are bored and need of new games and pleasures. Why can’t the husbands compete in games and challenges. All the better if they are operated and controlled by wives other than their own. Naturally failures will have consequences. Who better than the mortified wives should punish the failures and of course in public. Alternatively, the punishments could be awarded to the victorious wives all at the expense of the losing husband.

Anyway, those are some of my thoughts. No doubt you or some other skilled writer could improve on them to a considerable degree.

With my best wishes for you and your muse; I remain your most humble and obedient servant, :ibow4u:

poolman2

Poolman2, you have some excellent ideas. Scenario 3 reminds me of the Wanda and Severin relationship in "Venus In Furs" by Leopold von Sacher-Masoch. That would need a novel, not a web-story.

And thanks for the nice comments about my skills. Glad they're appreciated :jumpsmile

You are already almost halfway to a novel.

http://uk.geocities.com/alecanaconda/GetPublished.htm

Thanks Alex! And for keeping count!

Almost halfway to a novel, you say?

I started this thread in July last year, over six months ago. I really can't see time for a novel :( .

But thank you! :)

But it suits me just posting as-and-when the story emerges. And it can be a bit interactive. For example, I was really encouraged by some positive Dom responses :iluvu: . And I asked for suggestions from viewers/readers and could sometimes work them in :bananajum . And it stops me from rambling - the episodic structure keeps me to the point :jumpsmile .

And I can keep my eye on the number of "hits" to the thread so I can pace the writing to the reading :D . Hold back sometimes until enough people have read the last episode or commented on it so I know I'm not alone here :cryingblu .

Anyway, a great Forum and see you soon

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Originally Posted by skweezme

Eventually, she was finished. So was he. She sat astride him, settled, panting and grinning. He was moaning under her weight. She gently rocked herself on top of him. Made him groan to the rhythm of her movements.

“Phew, Lieb! That was good! Shall we…you know…do his balls a bit more now?”

She ground herself down on him a bit harder. He cried out. She looked up at me with a wide and wicked smile. She wasn’t done yet.

I grinned at her and nodded. Why not? She was really getting into this. She was such a star!

“OK! What do you want to do, then?”

She climbed off him and stood up next to me. He slowly curled up into a groaning ball, arms still tied behind him, his back and spine battered from her treatment. Barefoot, Maggie was still a little bit taller than me in my high-heeled boots. I could feel the heat radiating off her skin. Could smell her sweat, her pungent sex.

We both looked down at him writhing on the floor.

“What do I want to do, Lieb? Oh, I don’t know! Let’s try something different! Like…a bit of a game or something?”

“A bit of a game? You got something in mind, Mags?”

She grinned.

“Maybe! How about if…if we each grabbed a ball and see who can hurt him most? Bet I can squeeze his balls harder than you can!”

I had no doubt who would win. But it would be a fun game to play, anyway.

“Sounds good! Let’s do it!”

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I love you SKWEEZEME!! Thanks for incorporating my fantasy into your story.

awesome story sqeeezeme! thanks for what you did in the last story for me. is it possible that in your next story that you could have one of your girls break one of his balls? that'd be great.

again, thanks alot. that really made your story a million times better for me.

Busting a nut? That'd be cool. And so cruel. Don't know if the girls are ready to go there yet. But who knows! :jumpsmile

what would it take to bust a nut? Not just squeezing by hand. Maybe a clamp or vice just on one nut? Or both? Here's a story from a while back...

http://femaledom.com/forum/showthrea...light=skweezme

Or maybe stamping? With boots on?

I must go and lie down again :D :asleep :asleep :asleep

36,016 views! Phew! Glad you like it!

Take your backup sk, before it goes.

I’ve updated and moved my “Get Published” guide.

www.ebooksbdsm.com/authorguide.htm

Alec Anaconda

Thanks for update Alec but link not working. And thanks for reactivating this story. Amazed at the positive responses - so glad it worked for so many. As you and other readers know, I was writing BB stories and posting them here for quite some time, encouraged by responses.

But I've had nothing to write for a while.

This is because of an utterly wonderful change in circumstances. My fantasies don't come out in stories any longer because I'm seeing an amazing Domme who's doing it all with me in real life. Everything I imagined and more! She's a bit like Maggie in the story (in build and delicious cruelty) but a Maggie who's a dominatrix with several years' experience, who knows just what she wants, and can give a masochist just what he wants, even if he didn't know it!

I guess, from the stories, you could tell I was ready for this.

I'd recommend it, but I think I've been lucky choosing/finding a dom who's perfect for me. As you can imagine my tastes from the stories, she's much taller, heavier and stronger than me. Imaginative, sensitive, caring. But loves to push me more than I can take. But I end up taking it and loving it afterwards even if it's hell at the time!

So I'm sorry folks but it looks like there won't be anymore stories now. Reality's taken over and I can hardly believe my luck!

I'm still here on femaledom and enjoying all your posts, in between visits to my mindblowing Mistress!

Thank you for taking the time to look, Mr Skweezme.

I’m please that you’re happy, but is Mrs Skweezme still relevant?

I was not trying to prod you into writing again, just correcting a dead link. I’m not sure how it went wrong, but I’ll try again.


http://www.ebooksbdsm.com/authorguide.htm



Alec Anaconda