My first attempt at a story

[poolman2]

Hi lws8512

Congratulations on writing an excellent story. I really enjoyed reading it. I truly hope you continue your good work.

Incidentally, I hope we get to read of some barefoot action, as well as activity by the wicked stepmother. These are my preferences, not a criticisms.

poolman2

[0514791]

I personally didn't like the story, but I did like the writing style. I think it's well written, and I'm curious to see what stories you will think up in the future.