Thanks for the feedback. I probably wont do another cutting story again but wanted to give it a try just to let you know. I have heard a few people say they would like to get more into Rachel's mind so I think I will have to make that happen. As for any personal details about me I would like to remain fully anonymous (especially given what I write about) I hope you can respect that.
There does not seam to be a lot of interest in my captions on this forum so that is why I have not posted any more but you can always get them at http://www.imagefap.com/profile/worldwide12. I have been busy but am still writing so watch this space.