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    New ballbusting stories blog

    Hi, just wanted to say I've made a site with my ballbusting stories on. There are plenty there so far (four completed the others at various stages). I will update these stories quite regularly (hopefully every weekend) so please feel free to take a look and comment.

    The site is http://ballbustingstories.blogspot.com/

    jonoffen

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    Wow, can't believe no one has commented yet. Guess I'll go first. You my good man have a brilliant pervy mind. And I bow to your greatness...



    Had no idea you wrote the one about the School Babes. Although I can't remember where I read it before. It's remained one of my all time favs. In fact I gotta admit that all your stories are great. Even the incomplete ones. Hope you get a chance to finish the unfinished ones (esp. Coffee Shop & Holiday). And that you can keep writing new ones too. Thanks

    BTW glad to see you have your own site, definitely gonna bookmark it.

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    Awesome blog! Thanks for the link, keep up the great stories!

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    God, the scrubs story with carla and elliot was so hot. I wish Sarah Chalk(sp?) would bust my balls. You really capturred her character too, can't wait for the fiinish.

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    Really nice Jonoffen! I especially like the big breasts anlge, it's one of my favorite themes!
    Bravo, keep it up!

    -Knave(EM)

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    Wow, erm, thanks everybody. I'm glad you all like them.
    I'm really interested in which are you favourites as I jump from one favourite theme and set of characters to another quite often so let me know, on the blog or here's fine.

    I just finished the Hermione's New School story, there's a good example of needing your feedback - I couldn't decide which ending worked best, so I went with my favourite, but added the alternate ending too so you can decide.

    Thanks again and I'll make sure I keep posting my filth religiously.

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    Hi, I hope you've all had a chance to read my stuff.

    I was wondering how people felt about the length of my stories?

    Do you prefer short, sweet ones like Ballbusting School Babes; epic 26-pagers like Hermione's New School; or somewhere in between like Lilly's Lessons?

    I ask because I noticed Hermione's New School isn't as popular as I hoped it would be (being my latest). Is it too long, is the theme too fantastical or is it something else?

    Also, do you prefer ultra-realistic, slightly comedic (my fave) or complete fantasy ball-busting?

    As I'm currently writing others, it would be great to hear you opinions.

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    The length of Hermione's New School wasn't a problem for me. I just didn't like the endings (sorry ). If I had to pick one I'd go with the alternate version, but tbh there wasn't enough busting in either of them. Also the reason for all her trouble making really didn't appeal to me. And neither did the back stabbing. Never thought she'd be that insecure. Putting that aside, I really did like the characters & I actually liked the way it started off. I'd love to see a continuation that was more... realistic(?). I mean the magic aspect was great and all, but when it comes down to it magic isn't really good for busting. IMO it kinda has to be more of a physical 'hands on' thing. An example would be the part with the driver where she used magic to set up the bust, but used the wrench for the actual act. The stomps towards the end were very good too. If you do decide to make a sequel maybe you can have the three girls form a 'unholy' trinity of ball busters. I'd also like to read in more detail about why Cho was expelled.

    Anyway, to answer the other questions.

    On the topic of length, it all depends on how the story flows. Some stories only work when things are kept short and to the point. Others work better when things are explained in great detail. I've read almost all of your stories, and so far I think you've done a fine job in figuring out which stories should be long. And which should be short.

    As for what kind of story. I'd say realistic, (but not necessarily ultra) with some comedy mixed in are the ones I like best. As far as fantasy goes, it depends on the story. While a subject like magic works in HNS and The Charmed Ones. It might feel out of place in a story like The Coffee Shop or Ball Busting Vacation.

    Hmmm, I hope all my rambling made sense... obviously this is all just my opinion. And some might have different likes or dislikes, but whatever. You just keep doing what you do.

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    Thaaaank you! Yeah, I see it now - nowhere near enough busting. Sigh. I'll have to take some lessons from porn - I hear there's a 15 minute max of how long it can go without sex. I'll make sure I use the principle on my next stories, but the truth is I like there to be a reason for what the characters are doing...maybe I'll have to have more characters busting balls for the fun of it

    I also enjoy writing the tit/cunt busting and humiliation parts so sometimes balls are forgotten about for a little while. I try and find a balance.

    Again, thank you for you feedback. It all helps!

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    I enjoy the humilation too. Love the wonderjugs story where she is mocking his small dick. I not a big fan of cunt busting, but I am just glad that you are writing the stories, so I will take what I can get. WHich is hopefully a couple of kicks I like reading them all by the way, my favorites are any with celebs in them. Keep up the great work.

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    Just finished The Coffee Shop. I think this is one f my best as far as the balance between ball-busting and big tits goes.

    As always give it a read and let me know what you think.

    I see me doing a lot more like this (straight ball-busting/**********), but I always enjoy doing other stories with cunt/tit busting thrown in as well.

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    i just finished ballbusting school babes and ballbusting college babes and loved them

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    they were all pritty good need some more jerking off tho

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    Just to let you know, I've updated Ballbusting Holiday (actaully had quite a lot of fun on that and have much more story to come) and also a small update to Invulneraballs with much more to come soon.

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    jonoffen,

    I like your wrting style I also like the way you use humour. very good !!!

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