I think what happened might be too offensive, might not. maybe if you change who the people were, then do the story with captions? I know the story got me hot, and im sure others will like it too, but i can see how some might get botherd by certain aspects of it. just change the titles of some of the characters. Knowing the story, the pic you drew of the barn made more sense to me then to others im sure. Here are some ideas...Amazons? Vikings? Druidess? A celtic goddess grinding up a mans parts in a grain wheel or a mortar and pestle.. viking girls with hammers...amazons with spears and cooking pots hows that for some fresh ideas?