Originally Posted by AlexBB
sorry guys, my english is very poor. maybe you can write better text for this action? ))
whoa! thank you very much AlexBB! Great job!
I'd suggest (waiting for a native speaker):
1)
- Oh dear! Look at that scared face!
- Ashley was taking a bath when suddenly Jillian and her friend came into the school locker room.
2)
- Did I tell you there's no room for you in this school? didn't I?
- Ashley soon paniced
3)
- Honey, please... Crush those nuts!
- Ashley's worst nightmares were confirmed when Jillian blasted a hard kick with the toe of her sharp shoe right in her helpless tender balls
4)
- AAARRGH! Ohhh... please... no, it's sooo painful...
- Ashley hadn't ever believed such a nightmare was possible. She collapsed in pain holding her swollen privates and listening to the laughing girls
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