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another thing from me
For "high voice." A good caption for the golf toon (that somebody else may have thought up already, but I don't really care). "Fore! Or maybe I should just say, 'Two!'" Or, "Forget about a hole in one. After this, you could end up having a hole in two! Maybe even two extra holes" Maybe "Is playing with more than one ball at one time cheating? Let's really hope not!" Perhaps, "Regardless of anything that happens to me or you, I will always be ahead of you by countless 'strokes.'" Or "You've obviously heard of the golf term "birdy," right? You know, when somebody gets their ball in the hole at two under par? Well, anyway, after this next shot, you'll be seeing a whole lot of birdies, and I don't mean in the ways of golf." That one was a little long for a one panel comic, and could be used a lot better in a four-panel comic strip. Same topic.
First panel: A close up on the area of the girls torso right up to the top of her head, sly look on her face. (Plus the golf club, of course.) Caption: "You've ... right?"
Second panel: Image of her from skirt to head, shower her with a slightly informative look, standing up, facing the man on the ground, yet still having kind of a sexy, clever look about her. She is holding her club down, with her hands on the head (putting part) of the club. (Include some background, but just the sky. Caption: "You ... par?"
Third panel: You can see some hills in the background, as well as some sky. As for the girl, show from the start of the upper leg to the top of her head. She's holding the club right side up, and at a 90 degree angle. There is a simply sexy, clever, and slightly mischievous look about her body language, including, obviously, the look on her face. Caption: "Well.. birdies,"
Fourth panel: entire scene. Girl's holding the club at a 135 degree angle. The guy is grinning in a complex mix of much nervousness, wierd excitement, utter dread, complete fear, and odd anticipation. Girl's face and body language shows mixture of sexiness, mischief, playfulness, charm, girlishness, maliciousness, and cleverness. Caption: "and ... golf!"
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