Read it, loved it as usual. :thumbup
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Read it, loved it as usual. :thumbup
Mythical Pain: great stuff as always. Your description and backstory always go above and beyond -- your characters are so fully fleshed-out, way more than any other BB author I can think of. (Heck, my serial characters don't have half the characterization that your throw-away ones do...you've said as much about Gorl and Mira in 1K words as I've said about P'oiu or Lia in 50K.)
I will say that your snippets always feel like a bit of a tease, which is both a good and a bad thing :P You tend to write these wonderful descriptive scenes that build up to one solid kick and then nothing more. I'd love to see you do the opposite sometime and really go to town, bashing around some dragon danglies/gryphon gonads/etc. well beyond their normal limits. I'm not saying you have break anything, but convincing a male that he might be about to lose a nut or two can be awfully fun. (I can totally imagine a dragon at the mercy of a female knight, the knight taking out her frustrations on his scaly sac and going a bit further than she intended to, the dragon growing increasingly worried that she intends to end his line entirely...)
As for me: wish I could be better about contributing here, but real life gets in the way :P Still working on the end of Dragon Slaying, and some Pokemon/Underground League stuff, and even some MLP:FiM material (hey Big Mac, it's apple-bucking season!), but I'm writing at a pretty glacial rate, so I don't know when I'll next finish something. Maybe I'll pop in with some snippets of my own sometime soon.
Well it becomes a matter of realism, right? There has to be very different psychological stuff at play in order for repeated and persistent busting to be plausible. Like, in most instances in which a kick would happen, one is probably all that's needed.
but... that doesn't mean there aren't situations that could be described realistically (without positing a deranged protagonist) that would go further.
Thanks very much! ::Grins:: You should write up a little quicky story,too. Half the reason I'm posting some of these quickies lately is to keep this thread going strong and to encourage other folks to give writing a try, too! We can always use more furry/dragon/gryphon ball busting stories!
Thanks very much Poiu, that's a huge compliment! I do try and include some characterization even in the quickie stories, I think it makes the kicks and the story itself that much more enjoyable. At least to me!
As for the snippets being a bit of a tease...I guess that's the way I roll, hehe. I figure when I'm writing about a young wolf or fox, in a sort of situation where it's a sister kicking him in the nuts...realistically, one kick and a young male's gonna be bawling on the ground for a while.
Though, more to the point, both Gorl/Mira and Melissa/Adam were written up specifically to be a real quick, one-shot story. Basically, something I could write in one evening, and toss up on this forum, and the furry sites the same night. Case in point, I actually started a different story with Melissa and her brother before I'd even started the one I actually posted, and still haven't finished that one. In that one, it's her older brother, and as he thinks he's tougher and tries to get her back with some vicious titty twisters, he definitely ends up getting more then a single kick. He gets a kick, a knee, and a squeeze, and she might get him again later. Guess I should post that one up, too, eh?
The more kicks and ball abuse I squeeze in there, the longer it takes me to write it, obviously, and if I can't get it done in a night, it defeats my original idea to try and throw a new story up here every week or every couple weeks.
In Princess/Pets though they get a few busts each per chapter, hehe. Nothing that's gonna burst anything, but then again, there wouldn't be a story to continue if that happened hehe.
But rest assured, I do definitely have ideas for longer stories featuring more intense busting sessions. Melissa inviting some friends over to gang up on Adam, Princess Rebecca really going to down...
And yes, a dragon getting his stones knocked around for quite a while by a human woman. My question to myself there is, do I want to just do a long, intense busting session, or do I wanna take the in-depth, long-form story idea I have for that that would lend itself to such a scene?
Maybe both, lol.
And I definitely think you should toss up some snippets of your own on here, your stuff is great! I think we should have a new BB story on this thread from someone at least once a week, and if more, even better!
That's kind of how I see it, too. In some stories, like the latest one, I don't wanna necessarily set up Mira as the girl being bullied...and then have her go so overboard Gorl might lose a wolf nard. ::Giggle:: I figure after all that time getting shoved around for much of her life, and still being a fairly young wolf....
...Seeing her brother crumple to the floor in tears from a well aimed kick is more then enough for her to feel some sweet feminine justice.
Of course, that's not to say she might not start getting him there all the time, or that she might not stop by with her friends sometime to take turns trying out that particular move!
I'd say I don't really want my female characters to come across as totally deranged kicking machines as you put it...but as I say that, I know plenty of folks would think Rebecca was completely deranged for kicking for Foxy and Thrag/Puppy all the time. :D
So I'll say, I like to maintain at least a little plausibility.
That said, if a female soldier at war with dragons catches a male dragon...or a female dragon slayer, who religiously hates dragons catches a male dragon, for example...well, it's certainly plausible she'd be messed up enough, or furious enough, to feel justified in busting his balls all day long! ( Especially if it was a dragon known for attacking villages or something. )
Which, is one of the future stories I may do, hehe. Still gotta finish up Princess/Pets Chapter 3 though!
Most of us don't have accounts on FA and therefore can't follow the link.
I totally missed that! Guess I was expecting something posted on the page rather then a link lol, but I'll go check it out as soon as I have a chance.
OneFrom is right, though, not everyone here has an FA account, and if not, will be unable to read your story. I've got one these days, made it to start posting some of my stories.
I think this forum is mostly more M/F then M/M oriented, that's why I never posted my Dragon Tribe story here. ( One male dragon busting another male dragon's balls, plus oral. ) but I posted it on FA and SF.
I see you co-wrote that one with Hooves, hehe. I like his work a lot, but as I'm not as into ********** as he is, sometimes it's a bit more then I was hoping to see happen to his poor charries. ::Grins:: Anyway thanks for posting and sharing, hope to see more!
I'll let ya know what I think when I get a chance to read it, might comment over there. Oh, and don't worry about the size, Princess and Pet chapters one and two were both something like 7-10 pages long, but I posted them up here anyway. The formatting and the size of the text box here makes it more bearable.
I'm really loving this topic. I'm usually more of a visual person, but the way some of you right these stories is really amazing! Keep this thread going!
This is my first try at furry.
I expect it will also be my last, for I don’t like this tale at all.
Mrs Tidiwinkle, the year old tortoiseshell pussycat, screeched as only cats can, when Mr Pickles grabbed her tail with his teeth.
‘Nasty oversize mongrel,’ she thought, quickly escaping upstairs and leaving Mr Pickles vainly attempting, yet again, to force his head through the very stair gate bars designed to keep him out of the bedrooms.
‘I’ll rest on my servants’ bed,’ Mrs Tidiwinkle contemplated, but a sounds of a thump followed by a sharp intake of breath ****** her to stop and study the bedroom, through the crack in the half open door.
This pussycat noticed her people had discarded their coats, stood upright, and the food servant was kicking the dirt-tray servant between his legs.
Fascinated, Mrs Tidiwinkle resisted her instinct to stroll in and play cute.
Food servant seemed to concentrating her blows upon the dangly bits, the parts he always kept well away from sharp claws.
Suddenly, dirt-tray servant uttered a growl, carried food servant to the bed, then began to stroke and kiss her all over.
‘I always wonder how she licked herself clean down there. How clever, getting him to do it!’ mused the cat.
Abandoning all thoughts of sleeping upon her favourite bed, Mrs Tidiwinkle curled up with just one eye open to watch the continuing action.
***
Ten minutes later, the pussycat awoke, thinking,
‘If I touch that flee bitten dog’s dangly bits, perhaps he’ll be kind to me’.
Without further delay, Mrs Tidiwinkle found Mr Pickles standing with his paws on the windowsill.
She stood between his lower legs and powered her hard bony head into her target.
Far from being pleased, the shocked creature yelped, leapt onto windowsill, crashing into the glass with a resounding bang.
Mr Pickles howled as a demented banshee, cowered and shivered.
‘Funny, dog does not seem to like that at all. I’ll have to try again later’.
The wretched hound jumped from his perch, as the inner pane of the double glazed unit cracked.
He landed halfway across the room, shattering the coffee table that broke his fall.
Mrs Tidiwinkle spat as a dislodged screw parted her whiskers then ran up the curtains.
As heavy footsteps pounded down wooden stairs, the glass split three more times in quick succession.
Mr Pickles regurgitated his food, forming a steaming volcano upon the new carpet.
***
Within the sunny back garden, Mr Pickles sat as far as he could from Mrs Tidiwinkle, with his gaze firmly locked in her direction.
Each time the pussycat moved, he moved away from her.
***
By dusk, an apple-drunk wasp, buzzing one of his old bones handing from a branch, distracted Mr Pickles.
‘Let’s see if I can get it right this time. I’ll do it harder,’ resolved Mrs Tidiwinkle, silently positioning her head beneath his back legs.
To be fair, pussycat did not notice the wasp when her hard head pounded into Mr Pickles’ balls, but he most defiantly did.
Mr Pickles’ pathetic heart-chilling yelps, as he bounded away, brought the servants to the garden.
The tormented hound cleared the six-foot fence first time, and then howled as tyres screamed and a truck horn blasted.
Mrs Tidiwinkle strolled though the open door and decided the airing cupboard would suit for her nap.
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I suppose that as I left my reader(s) to imagine the dog’s demise, I could continue, except for a rather sad coincidence.
I’ve just found out that the dog’s name I used was far too similar to one owned by a celebrity.
That dog recently died in tragic circumstances.
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One quickie. Nothing graphic, just another Sonic-styled sketch done by someone on Deviantart.
http://xxxxcosmoxxxx.deviantart.com/...et=96#/d30xgyc
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/2684335/
This has always been one of my favorites.
http://laslindas.katbox.net/?p=387
Here's one that was linked to earlier, but the link changed. Thankfully I was able to find it again!
A story on Fur Affinity: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6387065
It's M/F Lion/Tiger with ********** and penectomy. A bit extreme for my tastes, but very well written. The writer is currently taking commissions.
Small Dragon Slaying update:
It's not dead! It's also not finished. But here's a little something just to show it's not abandoned, and to hopefully revive this thread (seriously, everybody, post your stories/pics/ideas!)
FIRST: Here's the entire story so far in PDF format. In case you want a nice compilation of all 14 chapters, or in case you need to re-read the damn thing to remember what's happened so far :P
SECOND: Here's the beginning of the final chapter. It's not much, but it's something, and hopefully the rest will come soon. (I've actually written a lot of the chapter, but the middle third is giving me trouble...turns out a 3-on-1 ball-popping climax is kind of tricky to pull off. Whodathunk?)
Anyway, enjoy. Comments appreciated as always. Previous chapter here.
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In any other situation, I imagine I would have been thrilled to have three gorgeous, naked women all so focused on my groin. Hell, I'd fantasized about scenes like this since I was teenager...and the particular selection of ladies in front of me had the kind of curves that made my balls ache with need.
Unfortunately, given the circumstances, I knew my balls would soon be aching for a much less pleasant reason.
"So." Opal looked a bit nervous. "Uh...what's the plan, exactly?"
"What's there to plan?" Kayla asked, sauntering up between my legs. The orca glanced down at my scaly orbs for a moment before giving a half-hearted kick -- practically a gentle nudge, by her standards, but still enough to make me grunt in pain. "We drain 'em, we pound 'em, and we pop 'em. It's not complicated."
"We pop one," Lia corrected, stepping forward herself. She flicked my sac with a toeclaw, earning another involuntary grunt as the ache shot straight to my abdomen. "And even popping just one of his balls is going to be a hell of a lot of work. The stubborn little things might as well be made of rubber."
Another toe-flick from the ruby-scaled dragoness sent a third jolt of nutache through my body. This time the pain throbbed in my gut for a moment before fading away, and I exhaled tensely, fighting back a quiet groan as my stomach tightened and relaxed. I shot Lia an exasperated look, hoping for some sympathy from my potential mate-to-be, but the mischievous grin that I got in return told me that the female intended to toy with me as much as possible.
Stupid sexy Lia.
"Well then, how exactly are we gonna do this?" Kayla planted a hand on her bare hip, looking up at the dragoness. "I get that Opal's on cock-sucking duty, but what about us -- you wanna take turns stomping one into jelly? Use his sac as a punching bag? Squeeze the spunk out of one, maybe?" The female looked down at my groin. “I mean, I doubt I’m big enough to get a grip on his stones, but with those claws of yours you could have him squealing soprano in no time...”
If Opal's face was red from the cock-sucking comment, mine was twice as green from the list of nut tortures that followed. As Kayla rattled off a list of potential plans for popping my plum, I felt myself grow increasingly nauseous, each treatment worse than the last. The look on Lia’s face didn’t help, either. I could see a hint of a smile gathering at the corners of her mouth, and after a moment she shifted her stance, now drumming her toes atop my soon-to-be-doomed dragonmakers. It was hardly the first time Lia had been poised to flatten my nuts, and yet I had never been so acutely aware of the practiced ease with which she pinned my orbs to the floor. I tried not to imagine how many other males she'd teased into a frenzy and then stomped into oblivion…how many scaly spuds had been ground into goo between her claws…how many dragon testicles had already burst between her toes. Dear god, why I had I ever agreed to this?
"Ooh, or maybe some tail-busting! Slam that thing up between his legs, see if anything breaks. I used to love doing that to my boyfriend. Er, ex-boyfriend." The orca glanced back at her tail flukes, smiling nostalgically. "Ex-boy, actually. Anyway, with an ass like yours, I'm sure you can crack that thing like a whip -- I'll bet you could shatter his nut like it was made of glass."
That mental image was enough -- my stomach crawled at the thought. "Are you seriously going to discuss all this right in front of me?!" I blurted, staring wide-eyed at the trio of females. "You realize I'm right here listening, right?"
"Well, yeah. Why wouldn't we discuss this around you?" Lia rolled one of my dragonmakers beneath her foot, putting a little weight on the fat sphere and making me groan involuntarily. "I mean, we're going to be doing all these things to you in a minute anyway -- you might as well know what's coming."
"Urrgh." I let out a tense breath, fighting the urge to groan again as the dragoness continued toying with my nutsac. "I really just want to get this over with."
"Hey -- I'm not the one with balls of steel. If it was up to me, we'd be done already." The red female shifted her weight for a moment, earning a wheezing gasp from me before she lifted her foot away entirely. "But if it makes you feel better, we'll discuss it in private." She grinned. "That way it'll be a surprise."
"Great," I answered sarcastically. It was a small victory, but a victory nonetheless.
"Before that, though, I've got to ask you one more question." The dragoness knelt between my spread legs, planting one hand on my thigh to ease herself to the ground, and her eyes flicked upwards to meet my own. In any other situation, the predatory look on my mate-to-be's face would have been an incredible turn-on. As it was...well, it was actually still pretty sexy, but that was negated by the shiver that ran down my spine as she took hold of my scaly pair.
"Alright, stud, moment of truth." The dragoness hefted my swollen spunk-makers in her claws, rolling my marbles between her fingers for a moment and feeling their weight. "Which should I pop, lefty or righty?"
"Uh…" I had no idea. Was there a difference? "L-Lefty, I guess."
The female grinned. "Righty it is," she replied, delivering a friendly flick to the now-doomed gonad before letting my sac slip from her fingers.
I groaned weakly at the burst of pain that spread through my gut, my head jerking upwards for a moment before falling back to the ground once again. Dear god -- if this worked out, it was going to be one hell of a marriage. At least I'd be saving some other poor dragon from getting his stones pounded to a pulp.
Lia gave my thigh a reassuring squeeze, then climbed to her feet, turning to face the other girls. I tried to enjoy the view, my eyes tracing the sexy curve of her rear, but when I reached her tail I could only imagine it snapping upwards between my legs, crushing my balls into my pelvis. I felt nauseous for a moment, remembering some of the warning tailflicks she’d given me on the long journey home, and imagining how much worse a full-force slam would have been. Sure, my terrible case of blue balls might have saved a rupture, but just the thought...ugh.
Have you guys seen the Ball Brawl flash game over at fa? It's non-graphical unfortunately but that allows for a lot more dynamic fighting.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6507824
Awesome little Snippet, Poiu, thanks for sharing! Love it.
Got a pic to bump the thread with. Not really a ballbusting pic, but...
http://www.herpy.net/gallery/data/me...ed_monster.jpg
Tell me that creature's not begging to have his fat monster testicles kicked and stomped by some angry, bare foot girls from the local village?
Found a pic that fits here pretty well, not really ballbusting, it's more like **********. http://d.facdn.net/art/aggrobadger/1...adger_pic9.png
It's well drawn and I think it's a good find.
i'm loving all these pictures, please keep them coming
This thread needs more furry ballbusting! Been too quiet around here lately. Luckily, I have a solution...another story!
This one's another story involving Melissa, my ball kicking vixen, along with one of her brothers. This time, her victim is Jerrod, her older brother. I actually started this story before I wrote the one involving Adam that I've posted on here previously. So I came back to this one, and changed a few of the details to make it "gel" with Melissa's little universe.
This one also features more then a single shot in the nuts, so if you've been craving a fox or other canine getting his balls pounded a few times in a row ( Poui, hehe. ) well then by all means, read on!
This one also features a Melissa who is, perhaps, a little older then in the first story. It also has a few character details about her, and introduces her older brother Jerrod who learns the hard way trying to boss his sister around is a bad idea...
Great story as always!
mythical pain your stories are perfect