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Mythical Pain: great stuff as always. Your description and backstory always go above and beyond -- your characters are so fully fleshed-out, way more than any other BB author I can think of. (Heck, my serial characters don't have half the characterization that your throw-away ones do...you've said as much about Gorl and Mira in 1K words as I've said about P'oiu or Lia in 50K.)
I will say that your snippets always feel like a bit of a tease, which is both a good and a bad thing :P You tend to write these wonderful descriptive scenes that build up to one solid kick and then nothing more. I'd love to see you do the opposite sometime and really go to town, bashing around some dragon danglies/gryphon gonads/etc. well beyond their normal limits. I'm not saying you have break anything, but convincing a male that he might be about to lose a nut or two can be awfully fun. (I can totally imagine a dragon at the mercy of a female knight, the knight taking out her frustrations on his scaly sac and going a bit further than she intended to, the dragon growing increasingly worried that she intends to end his line entirely...)
As for me: wish I could be better about contributing here, but real life gets in the way :P Still working on the end of Dragon Slaying, and some Pokemon/Underground League stuff, and even some MLP:FiM material (hey Big Mac, it's apple-bucking season!), but I'm writing at a pretty glacial rate, so I don't know when I'll next finish something. Maybe I'll pop in with some snippets of my own sometime soon.
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