Furry Ballbusting

[Mythical Pain]

Amazing!!! Well written and such attention to detail. Quite impressive!

Thanks very much! Really glad you enjoyed it, and enjoyed the detail. I think good attention to detail helps even a kinky or fetish story be a lot more enjoyable.

Fantastic as always. I love the fact that you're a really good writer first, and a BB fetishist second -- it makes your stuff an absolute pleasure to read, both intellectually and, uh, otherwise :P Keep up the good work, man.

Thanks again, Poiu! Always appreciate your compliments. Like I'd mentioned earlier, I think trying to take it a bit seriously helps it become a better and more entertaining story that way. Hopefully makes the busts seem that much more "painful" too if you start to feel for the characters...excuse the pun. Hehehe.

What about you, what are you working on lately?

[Mythical Pain]

Fantastic part 2 MP! And not just the busts, you managed to develop the characters (especially the princess/foxy relationship) awesomely. I love that even though brutalizes him, she still lets him get away with stuff that would get other servants thrown in the dungeon.

Thanks very much! Yeah, I think their relationship is key to the story being more then just a fetish story. And the slow revealing of that relationship, even as it builds between them. He's kind of her only real friend, and vice versa, even if neither of them wants to admit it. I had this conversation with a friend from the site before, it's his favorite part of the story!

And I'm liking the coyote character. If I had to give a constructive criticism though, it would be that few men (or coyotes) would think any amount of money was worth getting their nuts smashed. Foxy is stuck with the princess, just seems like given his backstory, 'thrag' should have a stronger reason for taking the abuse.

As far as that goes, it's a fair point. But there's also a bit of behind the scenes motivation that isn't totally fleshed out ( yet ) in the story. But I put some more thought into it after reading your post, and here's how I look at it.

Thrag has only just arrived on the job. He had no idea his nuts were gonna be in trouble when he took it. Before he knew what was going on, he'd already gotten kneed in the balls and was down on the floor. Everything she did to him then was while he was more or less helpless.

At that point, his only options are resist, and get it worse, or give in and let her do it. Sure, he could decide then and there to leave. After all, he'd already thought about quitting the job several times.

But, while all the servants DO get paid and are generally treated well...she IS the princess. So Bottom Line is, what she says, goes! If he tries to leave and she decides that she wants to keep him, all she has to do is say as much, and her guards can keep him in the castle for the rest of his life without any pay at all.

He'd never make it a single step past that giant guard watching over Rebecca's room.

The way Thrag sees it, he can stay there and take the abuse, hoping it stops, and end up wealthier then everyone else he knows combined, or he can be kept there against his will, end up dirt poor, and still get his balls busted anyway.

Plus, his family is all hugely proud of him. He'd be far too embarrassed to tell them the real reason he quit, and he's always out to make them proud. He'd just look like a "Quitter" to them, and every time his family had financial problems after that, or got harassed by humans over debts he'd hear "Too bad you didn't keep that high paying job, Thrag, you could have paid all our bills off....Oh well..." His kind don't get the sort of leeway on debts that a lot of humans might, because of bigotry against them in the kingdom. He wants to make sure he can keep his family supported if they ever need it, as well as himself.

Thrag also wants to make humans see his people as less then barbarians, and what better way to prove how civilized his kind can be then to be known as the princess's personal servant? And no one else has to know how badly roughed up he got. For now, he's still hoping that after the first night, she'll go easy on him. ( Silly yote. )

So, those are the motivations I see for him, anyway. Also keep in mind that this is all rough draft, basically. Where I to write this out as a novel, I"d want to write the whole thing first, every single chapter, then I could go back and revise as needed to reflect changes in the story and the way their motivations change.

But since I'm writing and posting right away...well, rough draft is what you get, so they might not always have the sort of proper motivation they probably should.

But it was a great story! How many parts for this do you have in mind before you move on to one of your other ideas? If you keep this up, you could be writing furry BB stories for years lol (and im certainly not complaining)

Again, thanks very much! Really glad you enjoy it! I don't have a set number of chapters for it, I could conceivably go on just about forever. I have a bit of a long term plot in mind, but could take it anywhere.

I'll likely end up going back and forth between this and several of my other story ideas. I'm really wanting to get a human woman busting the hell out of a male dragon's dangly eggs in the near future, hehe.

I imagine I'll keep adding chapters to all my ideas now and then for a while. I've already written another one that I mentioned here but didn't post, as it was for a different sight, and was about two male dragons. So it wasn't totally appropriate for this forum, even though one of the dragons definitely get his eggs scrambled by the other hehe.

But my other ideas will definitely get posted here.

I'll probably do one more Princess and Pet chapter, where Foxy and Puppy end up nude, and then start on another idea, probably dragon related.

What about you? You should write some furry/dragon ballbusting stories, too!

[cast7]

Relevant:
I really enjoyed this site. Has a couple of pics too.
http://furryballbusting.blogspot.gr/...08c0126e50ea44

[poiu]

New Pokemon/Underground League story!

I've been toying around with this one for a while (I'm sure some of you have seen my public Google doc), but I'm finally declaring it finished. It's not super-polished, but I'd rather post it than sit on it for another few months like I typically do :P Enjoy some more Underground League/Pokemon Busting, and be sure to let me know what you think!

P.S. A few pics to help your imagination along:
Laura the Luxray: http://e621.net/post/show/219646/201...aws-collaborat
Kelly the Kangaskhan: http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/230537
Blaze the Blaziken: http://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/28487
Emma the Espeon: http://e621.net/post/show/85594/anth...-looking_at_vi


Hmm...the site isn't letting me post the full text for some reason. So here's a link!
http://furryballbusting.blogspot.com...ing-ropes.html

[beaktooth]

I was looking at some cross dressing and found this

http://e621.net/post/show/138902/

The knife makes me a little nervous ;}

[beaktooth]

Also... Did anyone catch The Cleveland Show on Sunday night?

The toddler with the afro (sorry, I haven't seen the show enough to know anyone's name) set up his own "seatless chair" interrogation scene (a la Casino Royale) with a Snaggletooth-looking doll. There's some kind of dialog and, like casino, the cat winds up whacked in the "cat-nards" with a weighted rope.

A few moments later, Cleveland is in the seat for some reason and gets thumped. He then whines of the pain in his "man-nards", lol. They really did say "-nards" like that, whatever, guess you had to be there.

[Mythical Pain]

Also... Did anyone catch The Cleveland Show on Sunday night?

The toddler with the afro (sorry, I haven't seen the show enough to know anyone's name) set up his own "seatless chair" interrogation scene (a la Casino Royale) with a Snaggletooth-looking doll. There's some kind of dialog and, like casino, the cat winds up whacked in the "cat-nards" with a weighted rope.

A few moments later, Cleveland is in the seat for some reason and gets thumped. He then whines of the pain in his "man-nards", lol. They really did say "-nards" like that, whatever, guess you had to be there.

Saw it! Not a big fan of that show, think its the weakest of his Three shows.

But, that scene was great! Lol, he called his nards the "Leopard-nards!" and then Cleveland said "My human nards!"

Lol, it was awesome.

[SagaDC]

Just got a piece of incentive art from Knave, a ballbusting artist better known on the other Ballbusting Cartoons thread. He normally sticks to human-on-human busting, but he made an exception for me. There's a preceding picture that he did years ago, which you can see on his website at: http://bbtoons.posterous.com/sagas-incentive

He also gave me permission to repost it here, so: