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Fantastic part 2 MP! And not just the busts, you managed to develop the characters (especially the princess/foxy relationship) awesomely. I love that even though brutalizes him, she still lets him get away with stuff that would get other servants thrown in the dungeon.
And I'm liking the coyote character. If I had to give a constructive criticism though, it would be that few men (or coyotes) would think any amount of money was worth getting their nuts smashed. Foxy is stuck with the princess, just seems like given his backstory, 'thrag' should have a stronger reason for taking the abuse.
But it was a great story! How many parts for this do you have in mind before you move on to one of your other ideas? If you keep this up, you could be writing furry BB stories for years lol (and im certainly not complaining)
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