Originally Posted by
dzwitch
whoa! thank you very much AlexBB! Great job!
I'd suggest (waiting for a native speaker):
1)
- Oh dear! Look at that scared face!
- Ashley was taking a bath when suddenly Jillian and her friend came into the school locker room.
2)
- Did I tell you there's no room for you in this school? didn't I?
- Ashley soon paniced
3)
- Honey, please... Crush those nuts!
- Ashley's worst nightmares were confirmed when Jillian blasted a hard kick with the toe of her sharp shoe right in her helpless tender balls
4)
- AAARRGH! Ohhh... please... no, it's sooo painful...
- Ashley hadn't ever believed such a nightmare was possible. She collapsed in pain holding her swollen privates and listening to the laughing girls
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