Quote Originally Posted by crushee View Post
Well, I have had, once, two versions of the story on my computer. The original one, juste copied from the significant posts (i.e.: without the comments!) and the other (slightly) enhanced (or spoilt!) in a few places, with some fantasies of my own.
Your comment is correct, the one I am posting is the second one.
But I have not kept all the approval posts of your original thread! Sorry...
Well done for admitting your modifications! I know it's only here and there and I can spot them cos they don't resonate with me in the same way as with you. Most readers probably won't notice.

But, of course, I think the original is best!