Quote Originally Posted by Gugle H. View Post
Yes, that would be great Just ballbusting, no real story (not that I dislike stories with a good story), maybe one or two poppings at the end^^
Hehe we'll see! I'm not as into popping as some people are...I tend to prefer my dragons to keep their toys intact, so the women can bust them again later lol.

Quote Originally Posted by jabby View Post
Excellent story as always MP! I especially like the fight at the end. You managed to keep the dragons looking powerful while making the humans out to be smart enough to be a credible threat. Sex scenes were great as usual too. Congrats!

If I had to criticize, I would say the ballbusting threats/references are starting to hurt the believability of the characters a little. I mean I love ballbusting, but its pretty unlikely that it would come up in conversation as much as it does. The bits are also too short to really be erotic, so it just feels a little ******.

Personally I would either save the ballbusting for some decently long scenes, add in some more sexy lines (aimed at boobs, dicks etc) to balance them out, or just go balls out and write some characters as having a testicle/ballbusting fetish.

A minor thing anyway. Personally while dragon in the dungeon is a great read, I am really looking forward to another of your ballbusting shorts. Any chance we could get a sneak preview of what the next one is about?
Thanks so much! Yeah, I wanted to make it clear that while smaller then some my imagine them, the dragons of my world can still lay a lot of humans to waste. And also that the humans can and do occassionally bring them down, using intelligent tactics...or sheer luck, lol.

Also wanted to make it clear that back in his day, Val was a real badass. Shows how far he's fallen when he ends up holding a raggedly old fur to his snout after having his nose split open by a whip later in life...

Of course...push him too far...well, we'll see if we get to that in later installments, hehe.

As far as ballbusting references, hehe, I think people on this site tend to pick up on those more then anyone else...most of the fans I've gained with this story series haven't made mention of them at all. Obviously, people here know I'm into that and so are they, so they pick up on them a bit more then others!

Plus, when I write fantasy I hope to try and publish some day...I gotta leave most of that stuff out. So I like to squeeze it into a story where I don't have to censor myself at all! ::Grins::

As for the next ballbusting-based short story...I don't know! Have a few ideas in mind. For a little while I was really into the idea of Melissa sleeping over at Sarah, the lioness's house...and having the two of them kick and knee Sarah's nerdy brother max right in his furry little kitten-makers hehe.