Quote Originally Posted by skweezme View Post
Is she too cruel?
I doubt that most men into busting would ever say your female character is too cruel and extreme. Lots of guys write of situations way beyond this. Personally I lean more to the teasing threats than to genuinely hurting anyone. Of course I will snarl, grit my teeth, and make someone think my fingernails are sure to pierce his cock clean through, but hey, I got plans for that cock later, so why would I ever wound it (laugh).

I liked your storytelling though. Being dominant, there are some elements that I particularly liked in this piece, as in the game with the dice. That was devious in the way you used it. In fact that game is probably a 'keeper' for a hot Saturday night.

I also loved the ending. When you have just teased and threatened a guy so bad his eyes are watering, what better way to end it than with a promise of more. That always seems to work for me anyway.