megakidbuu: Heh, no offense taken :P I'm just glad to see more people writing!

Mythical Pain: don't worry too much about the comments (or lack thereof). Hell, sometimes when I don't get much response to something that I thought was really good, I interpret it as a compliment -- it means the readers are too 'distracted' (ahem) by the story to leave their thoughts.

Finally, to close this post with a bit of nutpain, here's a random bit of art: http://www.sofurry.com/page/160918/watchlist